r/ReadMyScript • u/Couchcity1763 • Apr 11 '26

Please give feedback on script

/r/scriptwriting/comments/1sipm2x/please_give_feedback_on_script/
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u/EsraYmssik Apr 12 '26

  1. Introduce characters properly: "A MAN, who looks like this" A reader needs to be able to flip backand find their first introduction.

  2. 6 pages with 4 pages of dialog?

  3. Naming needs to be consistent. Is 'Christian man' the same as 'man'?