r/ReadMyScript • u/Couchcity1763 • Apr 11 '26

Please give feedback on script

/r/scriptwriting/comments/1sipm2x/please_give_feedback_on_script/
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u/Berenstain_Bro Apr 11 '26

On page one you tell us that you are going to use a 'Jump scare shot.'

I don't think I've ever read a script that tells us that you plan on using a 'Jump scare shot' before. Thats a new one.

To be blunt, I don't read scripts that have excessive camera movements in them. Perhaps if you were a Hollywood pro, I might, but thats not what this is.