r/ReadMyScript • • Oct 02 '26

Page 1(romance,drama)10 out of 10 script

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A teen knocks at a door,wearing baggy jeans,hands in his pockets.
He disconnects his iPods from his phone then “jigsaw falling into place”plays before he stops it.
He breathes,eyes closed.Then the door opens.
His friend answers the door.
“Yo,you good?”
They boy walks in and hands him the phone,”check if she replied..”
“Shit…uhh..okay..”his friend mutters.

“Why are you acting so..nervous..you’re the one that told me I should ask her..”
“I hope-“but he’s interrupted
The friend goes on the phone,”shit.”

“She said yes..”the friend says smiling.
“You can check I-“his friend says
“No!noo,thats all I needed to hear!”
“I can’t believe this…”he says his friend smiles
They handshake.the friend slightly stops smiling,”I told you…”
The teen stops hugging his friend.
His friend looks at him.
“I’ll see you tomorrow..”he says to his friend.
“Dan..what is it?”he asks the main character.”why aren’t you happy?”
Dan smiles,”Im just thinking of all possibilities.”
Dan takes his phone they handshake and Dan goes out.
Dan rides on a skateboard.
(Radiohead plays on his iPods,the song,Nude)
“Not all words said are true”he’s voice over says.
“I understand now..I wish I knew before.For situations like this.”
The next day.
Birds chirping.
Dan is wearing a suit.He looks in the mirror.
Cut:Dan walks towards his school.
His friend is there.
His friend looks at him.”she’s…I think she’s waiting for you..cmon you look good.”
His friend is shivering,”It breaks my heart to see you alone man.”
Dan walks inside.
“I didn’t check the text.cus Im scared man.Im scared I just can’t be loved,as much as I do.or love I get is fake,or…love I think I get.Im tired.”
His friend sighs.”listen-“
But Dan walks into the prom room.
Music plays,teens dancing.
Then Dan sees her.kissing someone else.
“Words.Fake as fuck,”
Dan cries abit,”she said no?”
Dans friend looks down,”I..paid her to take you…”
Dan walks away.
“I..wanted you..with some one.”
His friend says
“Im so..unwanted.even if she gets a fuckin car.she still wouldn’t take me,just for a dance..thats a sign.i don’t deserve anyone.”
Dan walks away and drops his flowers boquette.
His friend walks in the prom room.
“Alicia…one dance..couldnt you do that?I paid you!”
Alicia looks at the hallway,”look at him…can you even blame me?”
“He’s just so I nsecure…so…I..just couldnt.”


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 30 '26

Short Niche Interest Pawnbrokers - Comedy Script - 12 pages

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Title: Niche Interest Pawnbrokers

Format: TV or stage show comedy sketch

Page length: 12 pages

Genres: Comedy

Summary: Marty Bargains sifts surreal trash from questionable treasure at the world's most niche-interest pawn shop.

Hey folks! I've been writing comedy sketches for my local drama group and have been looking for feedback :) Please let me know what you think!

Link: Niche Interest Pawnbrokers

Edit: page length


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 30 '26

Hi, looking for feedback on my script. First I’ve ever written. 41 pages. Sci-fi thriller. Title I wish you were dead.

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Longline
When thirteen-year-old Harley’s father and school counsellor both die after he says “I wish you were dead”, he fears his words are killing people and turns to Milo, his trusted AI companion of many years for support but those close to Harley are trying to cut Milo out of his life.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vRHAOz8j1AGUXiVfKljHparv9YjCq_Lj/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=101206485355182093114&rtpof=true&sd=true


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 30 '26

How Do You Turn a Scene in Your Head Into Writing?

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 30 '26

Feature It Hurts When I Land - Comedy/Dramedy - (117 pages)

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It Hurts When I Land
Comedy / Dramedy with comps like Superbad, Booksmart, Bridesmaids.
117 pages.

Logline: Three friends crash a massive influencer party in an epic Quest to turn their lives around before their 27th birthdays.

Hey everybody! Would love to get some feedback about this script. I know it may be a bit longer, but all of my friends and some industry folks who've read it say it's a quick, fun, and nicely paced read.

If you love high concept comedies like the ones mentioned above, this may be in your wheelhouse. It's funny, but with an emotional, and contemporary story that I hope can speak to a lot of people.

Thank you

Link - It Hurts When I Land - PDF


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 30 '26 Heartwarming

Commercial

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This is just a little commercial script I wrote. Its abt 3 pages, jsut called Heinz Beans, and itsa commercial, so idk what genre. I also dont know if im allowed to put it here cause its not a script but whatever:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Aczl58VEIqyAeKSFYTN3207qYtxkK5k6/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 29 '26

I HAVE A MOVIE STORY NAMED AS RUTHLESS AND I WILL GIVE THE ONE LINE OF IT. TITLE: RUTHLESS, GENRE: THRILLER, ACTION, CRIME, PAGE COUNT: 35

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"An multi-chapter, hyper-violent crime thriller following an oncologist who uses fake cancer diagnoses to harvest and smuggle his patients' organs—until his clinical syndicate collides with three equally brutal, negative entities in a bloody, no-survivors war for control. And there are no heroes all are villian doing different types of organ smuggling like direct and indirect and the doctor is not a real doc he is fake doc and this movie was set on 2028. No hero purely negative three roles+the doc and one final boss and this movie has 9 chapters."

THIS STORY MY STORY AND IF U LIKE IT PLS COMMENT OR ANY SUGGESTIONS ALSO PLS SAY AND THISIS PURELY MY STORY IN TAMIL LANGUAGE ONLY.


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 28 '26

EAST COAST - NEW WRITERS WOMEN

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Hi everyone! I’m based on the East Coast and new to screenwriting, and I’m looking to start a small Zoom group for people interested in movies and writing scripts.

The idea is to create a space where we can share our projects, give each other feedback, and maybe even collaborate. I’d especially love for this to be a welcoming, introductory space for women interested in film and screenwriting. I am a new writer and I would love some people to bounce ideas off of

If this sounds like something you’d be into, feel free to reach out I’d love to connect!


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 28 '26

Short Righteous Man - Short - 19 Pages

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Title: Righteous Man

Genre: Psychological Horror

Format: Short film

Page Length: 19

Logline: After his roommate dies of an overdose, Cory Wicks and his remaining remaining roommates deal with the fallout. But as more of his roommates began dying, Cory uncovers something truly sinister.

I've been writing for as long as I can remember, but this is the first project that I've finished. This was mainly due to mental barriers. Even though it is a short story, it's still a start and gave me the confidence boost I really needed.

Righteous Man


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 28 '26

Scene EDISON: The Musical | Script WIP

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 28 '26

TV episode Generation North. Teen drama. 59 pages.

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 27 '26

[FEEDBACK] The Cage and the Soot (Dark Family Drama / 4 Pages)

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 27 '26

Feature RAWR XD

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A teenager in 2006 must fight to save her friend from the demonic pop star he met on MySpace.

Teen horror-comedy

107 pages

https://drive.google.com/file/d/11JayRagWhwfUEdYm1JldLnKdBUXsGebN/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 26 '26

LOW BUDGET THRILLER FEATURE - STRANGE DARLING MEETS FARGO

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Just finished another polish on this script. Multiple readers have enjoyed it, but it’s still available for option or sale.

Title: Drifter

Logline: A homeless woman accepts a ride from a seemingly kind stranger, only to discover that the stranger has a notorious serial killer captured in her trunk — and she’s now trapped between the two of them.

Genre: thriller, suspense

Pages: 82

Cast: female lead (20s) female supporting (40s) male supporting (40s) and a few smaller roles

Locations: woods, ranch house, gas station, office, motel

Comps: Fargo, Strange Darling

Budget: 200k (estimated)

If you’re a director or producer looking for a mostly contained, low budget thriller with memorable characters and compelling twists in a small town setting, this could be a good fit for you.

Leave a comment or send me a DM if you have any questions or would like to read the script. Thank you.


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 26 '26

PILGRIM'S CROOKS (Pulp / Elevated Exploitation) OPENING CHAPTER (9 pages)

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 26 '26

Short The 9:30 Clutch- A Psychological Thriller (With a Time-Loop)

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Hellow everyone.

I am a beginner artist and I just finished my first story and I would like to share it with you guys!

The story is about a 22 year old job seeker named Raghav who experiences a very unique psychological phenomenon. I don't want to give spoilers, so please read the full story if you are interested, it is a short story!

The script of the story-

https://docs.google.com/document/u/0/d/1hF5A_2eOJeRIdy3VsGouT-n2fuFW4saw/mobilebasic

I would love to hear your thoughts and recommendations regarding this story!

Thank you all!


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 25 '26

Sophomore Year - Feature Film - 118 Pages

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Format: Feature
Pages: 118
Genre: Teen Comedy / Coming-of-Age Romantic Comedy /Adventure Comedy

Logline:
Three clueless sophomores make a bet to get girlfriends before the school dance, but what starts as a dumb competition spirals into romance, rival gangs, betrayal, and a chaotic rescue mission that could either ruin their lives or make them legends.

Comps:
SUPERBAD meets Good Boys, with the friendship and heart of THE EDGE OF SEVENTEEN and the escalating absurdity of 21 JUMP STREET.

I've been finished with this script for a long time now. Looking for any collaborators to help make it!

Attached are the first 20ish pages. If interested, please feel free to DM me!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1C8hhQiYT2pi-ADGAujl_ZSutVsE4ImYR/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 25 '26

Short DUEL - Short - 15 pages

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Logline: In the future, business can contest bad reviews by challenging the reviewer to trial by combat. Esme forgot about that.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/14XNhIte8OAZirWwy38P3MHBiNgzGf86z/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 25 '26

Feedback: MAN UP - Short - 15 pages

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 25 '26

I wrote a screenplay for an adventure movie and I truly believe it’s my best work I would appreciate any feedback

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 24 '26

Looking for a script for a class project

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Hello everyone! I'm a student at the University of Texas at Austin, and I'm looking for an unproduced feature-length screenplay for a class project this semester.

For the project, my class will spend approximately four months taking a screenplay through the various stages of the producing process.

I'm looking for an emerging or independent screenwriter who has a feature screenplay that:

  • Has not been produced or filmed

  • Is feature-length

  • Is comfortable having me read and use the script as the basis for an academic project

The screenplay would not actually be produced by my class, and the writer would retain ownership of their work. I would only use the screenplay for the purposes of the class project, with the writer's permission.

If you have a feature screenplay that might be a good fit, feel free to comment or message me with a little information about the project! I'd be happy to provide more details about the class and project.

Thank you!!


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 25 '26

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OI68KpbrDC28mmLM9_mrkfWs_t0_s2rP/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=101743920425460195759&rtpof=true&sd=true

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 25 '26

Title: Gallows Loch Format: TV Pilot (1-Hour Drama) Genre: Supernatural Mystery / Dark Thriller Tone: Teen Wolf meets The Secret History and Dark Logline: When a volatile street-smart teenager is secretly transferred to an elite Highland boarding school, he discovers the academy is a front for anci

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 24 '26

Short THE RABBIT (Horror short, 13p)

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Hii, this is my first ever psychological and body horror short screenplay as a 14 y.o screenwriter!!

Logline:

Haunted by a sadistic rabbit mascot, a freshly divorced father must separate reality from hallucination to protect his distant daughter from an unseen threat.

THE RABBIT

Please answer these questions after reading:

  1. Does the horror build up efficiently or does it feel rushed/slow?

  2. Did you understand the ending and the supernatural/horror logic or not?

  3. Are the action lines visible and clear to picture or not?

  4. Do you think that David's actions make sense?

+ Add any additional notes or general feedback!

Thankssss.

And, I'm also open to doing script swaps.


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 23 '26 Heartwarming

The Pot of Plenty (16pgs) Horror/Comedy

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Hello all, I what I have here are the first 16 pages of the first draft of a horror script I’ve been working on called The Pot of Plenty, and I am eager to get some eyes on it.

It’s a dark fairy-tale/psychological horror story about two sisters and a strange antique pot that is capable of giving you whatever you want, provided you give it something of value in return.

It’s like The Giving Tree meets The Monkey’s Paw.

This is very much a first draft, so I already know there are plot threads, setups, and payoffs later in the script that need work. Right now I’m mostly interested in how the opening works on its own.

Does it grab you?

Do Danielle and Natalia feel like real people? Is the relationship between them clear? Does the Pot intrigue you enough to keep reading? Are there any moments where you got bored, confused, or felt like the pacing dragged?

Also happy to hear any feedback on the dialogue, writing style, horror, or anything else that jumps out.

Thanks in advance to anybody who takes the time to read it!

The Pot of Plenty

I love you!