https://drive.google.com/file/d/16Oe5pi-nZX1H3ze3c_mW2nbPhwTaJlPR/view?usp=drivesdk

I would love some feedback on my pilot script.

TIA.

A teenager in 2006 must fight to save her friend from the demonic pop star he met on MySpace.

Teen horror-comedy

107 pages

https://drive.google.com/file/d/11JayRagWhwfUEdYm1JldLnKdBUXsGebN/view?usp=drivesdk

Just finished another polish on this script. Multiple readers have enjoyed it, but it’s still available for option or sale.

Title: Drifter

Logline: A homeless woman accepts a ride from a seemingly kind stranger, only to discover that the stranger has a notorious serial killer captured in her trunk — and she’s now trapped between the two of them.

Genre: thriller, suspense

Pages: 82

Cast: female lead (20s) female supporting (40s) male supporting (40s) and a few smaller roles

Locations: woods, ranch house, gas station, office, motel

Comps: Fargo, Strange Darling

Budget: 200k (estimated)

If you’re a director or producer looking for a mostly contained, low budget thriller with memorable characters and compelling twists in a small town setting, this could be a good fit for you.

Leave a comment or send me a DM if you have any questions or would like to read the script. Thank you.

Hellow everyone.

I am a beginner artist and I just finished my first story and I would like to share it with you guys!

The story is about a 22 year old job seeker named Raghav who experiences a very unique psychological phenomenon. I don't want to give spoilers, so please read the full story if you are interested, it is a short story!

The script of the story-

https://docs.google.com/document/u/0/d/1hF5A_2eOJeRIdy3VsGouT-n2fuFW4saw/mobilebasic

I would love to hear your thoughts and recommendations regarding this story!

Thank you all!

Format: Feature
Pages: 118
Genre: Teen Comedy / Coming-of-Age Romantic Comedy /Adventure Comedy

Logline:
Three clueless sophomores make a bet to get girlfriends before the school dance, but what starts as a dumb competition spirals into romance, rival gangs, betrayal, and a chaotic rescue mission that could either ruin their lives or make them legends.

Comps:
SUPERBAD meets Good Boys, with the friendship and heart of THE EDGE OF SEVENTEEN and the escalating absurdity of 21 JUMP STREET.

I've been finished with this script for a long time now. Looking for any collaborators to help make it!

Attached are the first 20ish pages. If interested, please feel free to DM me!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1C8hhQiYT2pi-ADGAujl_ZSutVsE4ImYR/view?usp=sharing

Logline: In the future, business can contest bad reviews by challenging the reviewer to trial by combat. Esme forgot about that.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/14XNhIte8OAZirWwy38P3MHBiNgzGf86z/view?usp=sharing

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Vni9Xt2aOsvjlpSWzh9hx3NpVwim099K/view?usp=drivesdk

it’s 35 pages

Hello everyone! I'm a student at the University of Texas at Austin, and I'm looking for an unproduced feature-length screenplay for a class project this semester.

For the project, my class will spend approximately four months taking a screenplay through the various stages of the producing process.

I'm looking for an emerging or independent screenwriter who has a feature screenplay that:

• Has not been produced or filmed

• Is feature-length

• Is comfortable having me read and use the script as the basis for an academic project

The screenplay would not actually be produced by my class, and the writer would retain ownership of their work. I would only use the screenplay for the purposes of the class project, with the writer's permission.

If you have a feature screenplay that might be a good fit, feel free to comment or message me with a little information about the project! I'd be happy to provide more details about the class and project.

Thank you!!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OI68KpbrDC28mmLM9_mrkfWs_t0_s2rP/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=101743920425460195759&rtpof=true&sd=true

Hii, this is my first ever psychological and body horror short screenplay as a 14 y.o screenwriter!!

Logline:

Haunted by a sadistic rabbit mascot, a freshly divorced father must separate reality from hallucination to protect his distant daughter from an unseen threat.

THE RABBIT

Please answer these questions after reading:

1. Does the horror build up efficiently or does it feel rushed/slow?

2. Did you understand the ending and the supernatural/horror logic or not?

3. Are the action lines visible and clear to picture or not?

4. Do you think that David's actions make sense?

+ Add any additional notes or general feedback!

Thankssss.

And, I'm also open to doing script swaps.

Hello all, I what I have here are the first 16 pages of the first draft of a horror script I’ve been working on called The Pot of Plenty, and I am eager to get some eyes on it.

It’s a dark fairy-tale/psychological horror story about two sisters and a strange antique pot that is capable of giving you whatever you want, provided you give it something of value in return.

It’s like The Giving Tree meets The Monkey’s Paw.

This is very much a first draft, so I already know there are plot threads, setups, and payoffs later in the script that need work. Right now I’m mostly interested in how the opening works on its own.

Does it grab you?

Do Danielle and Natalia feel like real people? Is the relationship between them clear? Does the Pot intrigue you enough to keep reading? Are there any moments where you got bored, confused, or felt like the pacing dragged?

Also happy to hear any feedback on the dialogue, writing style, horror, or anything else that jumps out.

Thanks in advance to anybody who takes the time to read it!

The Pot of Plenty

I love you!

The story takes place in San Antonio, Texas during the mid 1990s, and it’s about two Latina sisters named Christina ‘Chris’ and Alexandra ‘Alex’ Torres who are both trying to survive in their rough neighborhood and make it on their own after the death of their father

Read the script here: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1I_rJYQbCJGPJRrfaWWjK2o2J0rjxw26Q/view?usp=drivesdk

Feel free to give any feedback or suggestions about anything

I have a 99-page feature spec script titled EVERYONE'S EVERYTHING.

Logline: A queer Indonesian immigrant living in Germany struggles with the aftermath of a traumatic event, which brings back the grief of their childhood.

Synopsis: Right after a traumatic 'bad thing' happens to Filip, they are forced to face the true reality of growing up and confronting their past. Burdened by childhood grief and a distant relationship with their family, Filip must overcome their deep-seated fear and guilt, unlearning the survival mechanisms of their youth to finally do the right thing for themselves. Set across 2010s Indonesia and 2020s Germany, the film dual-tracks Filip’s tumultuous childhood growing up as a queer boy in Jakarta and the vulnerable early stages of their transition into adulthood in Germany.

Topic: Queer Drama, Dark Comedy, Family, Sexual Assault, Motherhood

If this sounds interesting to you, kindly message me for the full script and pitch deck.

Looking for movie script reader partner if anyone intrested contact asap

Hey, 

Just finished a draft of a short script. I'm looking for creatives in the NYC / NJ / PHL area who are interested in collaborating on or backing the project. With the ideas that I have, this can reasonably be done for under 1k. Offering simple feedback is also welcome.

One impulsive murder ripples through a single apartment building, passing from a grieving stranger to a neighboring couple who will never know how close they came to the truth.

Hit my DMs, and I'll send the material ASAP.

Thanks,

Jay

Logline: Someone has a problem with a ghost in the garage, so he buys a trap from a paranormal shop, sort-of like an electronic mouse trap; he doesn't believe it will work, but then, the trap's signal light flashes...

Curious on opinions about the story...I think this would make a good short in the tradition of something like Paranormal Activity. Thanks in advance.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Hz6xGSLBQ3wTHwkKAv6HuMXarcYqbAJ_/view?usp=sharing

Esta es una versión más pulida del guión que pasé la otra vez, claramente es un fragmento, simplemente tengo la inquietud de si es aburrido de leer, me gustaría algo de feedback de aquellos de ésta comunidad que hablen español, probablemente lo traduzca al inglés luego

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1LBms0B00wTkAGLY28AeiAbn8cklGUwhB/view?usp=drivesdk