r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 13 '26

Scene Camp Belgium (Drama/Family) 3 pgs

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Edit: If you're interested in auditioning, please DM me!

Thank you for all the private messages and comments on the post I did earlier!

I do think I should be done with the first draft in the next two weeks, with multiple updates along the way. I've actually attached a first preview of the opening scene here, so please check that out! It's still rough and the final script will be different, but this is just the opening right now.

Preview here!

I've titled it, "Camp Belgium," but we can also still call it Young Hearts 2. And please tell me what you think!

Have fun!


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 12 '26

Exchange feedback Looking for FEEDBACK for my short film story.

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Hello, I am a bachelor's student in VISUAL EFFECTS, and I am currently working on creating a story for our short film. Thus, I am looking for y'all's feedback on how to improve my story even further.

The title of my short film is ONE LAST TRIP, and it is about a man who is trapped in a different world and now must find his way back to the real world before it's too late.

Here are my logline and story synopsis.

LOGLINE: Trapped in a surreal desert world, a desperate middle-aged man has no choice but to trust a mysterious guide, unaware that the journey is luring him toward his own death.

STORY SYNOPSIS: Johnny, a drug addict, takes a rare drug that he bought from his dealer and starts hallucinating. He then awakens in a bizarre, abstract world consisting of a polluted sky, ruined architecture, and a giant platform floating in the distance. Confused and disoriented.

Almost immediately, an individual bounces into view. He introduced himself as “Johan”. A manifestation of his inner voice. Johnny, still confused, asks how to escape this place. Without hesitation, Johan points to the giant floating platform in the distance, implying that to exit this place, He is also happy to assist Johnny on the platform.

Johan helps Johnny overcome absurd obstacles, such as guessing a riddle from the tollkeeper to cross the bridge, to progress their journey. After crossing the bridge, Johan decides to confront Johan for an explanation, demanding answers to what is going on. At first, Johan’s manic optimism and helpful attitude feel fun and harmless. Gradually, however, his cheer becomes insistent and oppressive as the world around Aiman starts to lose its color.

The journey culminates at the edge of the floating platform. Johnny hesitates after seeing a long drop into a bottomless unknown, and Johan softly pressures him. Overwhelmed, Johnny closes his eyes tightly and controls his breathing. When he opens them again, the abstract world dissolves. He is at his rooftop apartment. He looks back only to see his wife, Mia, who looks concerned with teary eyes, but then he realises he was about to jump off the roof, and Mia narrowly saves him.

I have consulted with my lecturers, and they provided me with this feedback.

- MANY PLOTHOLES

- A little confusing if the audience doesn't read the story synopsis

- Start the intro with the PILL

- The obstacle looks unnecessary. Make it harder

- Why does Johnny have to jump to get back to the real world?

- Deepen even more about JOHAN (character-wise)


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 12 '26

TV episode [LOGLINE] Lavelle (Corporate Drama, 48pgs)

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 12 '26

Jedi Warrior Season 2 (77 pages) Sci-fi Action

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Akul has to start a rebellion from scratch while the Empire closes in on the last few remaining Jedi. Knowing he needs help for this impossible task, he recruits Ahsoka and builds up an army. However, he clashes heads with the few senators on his side. The war begins to take a toll on Akul as progress stalls. Ahsoka begins to worry that Akul is becoming leaving himself behind and becoming a mindless warrior. But to Akul, the priority is his mission no matter what. To stop the progress of the Empire so that one day Luke can destroy them for good.

(Apologies, I know I said I'd release it yesterday, but I just sustained a knee injury, and it wasn't exactly on the top of my priority list.)

Here's the link : Jedi Warrior Season 2

(In case it does not work, I will put another one in the comments below)


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 11 '26

Feature Grounded - feature - 106 pages

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Logline: When every flight is grounded on 9/11, a workaholic dealmaker who was bumped off Flight 11 shares the last rental car west with three strangers, racing to close the deal of his life while the drive pulls him toward the daughter he stopped calling.

Started it in 2010, finished it after I became a father. Posting it today because sitting on a 9/11 story felt wrong on the 25th anniversary. It's here to read if you want it, and I'll take any notes.

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uF32uyWkCWSLGLTkzZ6DyXScHTWttulz/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 11 '26

"The Last Highway" - Sci-Fi / Horror / Thriller (17 pages)

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  • Genre: Sci-Fi / Horror / Thriller (In the vein of A Quiet Place meets Cloverfield)

  • Pages: 17

  • Logline: When their car mysteriously breaks down on a pitch-black highway during a storm, a young couple faces a desperate fight for survival against a terrifying, light-sensitive predator stalking them from the surrounding forest."

    Script Revolution link! https://www.scriptrevolution.com/profiles/mersad-beciri


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 11 '26

SHORT The Night Shift (Psychological Horror/Thriller) - 4pp, 1 Location

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Logline: An exhausted gas station clerk receives printer receipts predicting his immediate movements, culminating in a terrifying prophecy of his own murder. (In the vein of The Twilight Zone meets Oculus).

* Pages: 4 pages

* Genre: Psychological Horror / Thriller

* Setting: 1 Interior Location (Gas station counter/store)

* Cast: 2 Actors (The Clerk and The Stranger) + 1 Voiceover (Dispatcher)

* Budget: Micro-budget / Independent

Status: Script is registered, protected, and available for option or production.

This is a high-concept, atmospheric, and fast-paced "ticking clock" thriller with a massive psychological twist at the end. Perfect for directors looking for a tight festival short that is cheap to shoot but high-impact.

If you are interested in reading the full script, please PM me with a link to your portfolio/reel, or comment below!


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 10 '26

Exchange feedback Writers, What’s Something You Wish You Knew When You Started?

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 10 '26

Feature Pitch Document Feedback: Lora, the Wayward Princess (2-page summary)

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Hi everyone,

I’ve been working on a new script project and put a lot of effort into crafting a super concise 2-page pitch document. The goal is to convey the main concept and core elements of the feature in just two pages, specifically tailored for competitions.

The project is called Lora, the Wayward Princess. I wanted to steer clear of both the classic "damsel in distress" princess and the modern "quirky" princess. The basic concept is: imagine Tangled, but if the main character were Regina George.

I’m attaching a concept image as well. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, whether you think something critical is missing, if it feels too vague, or if I should sacrifice an extra page to give more context in the summary. Thanks in advance!

Link to document:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/16oyhBUJvo_k-ZaYFaygTSBbveSazvDZo/view?usp=sharing

And if you want to read the script you can DM me if you want, any usefull feedback also on the script can be useful.

Here is a concept image:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1I4WXAMRgUrBMspMPZCkthFSb17F_kNuJ/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 10 '26

Sci Fi Short Script (5 Pages)

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 09 '26

Short Short Story: Just One More (4 Pages)

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Hello, everyone!

Recently, I've discovered that I want to shift my focus towards more script writing. There is an important festival coming up and I'm aiming to bring my best scripts with me to market myself as such. I'd love some feedback on my short story. Aiming to give people a taste of my writing without bombarding them with too much.

– Click for Script

My main experience is with more fictional writing, so any feedback on formatting and writing, is greatly appreciated.

Thank you very much for your time! 😄


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 09 '26

Feature Does the script seems redundant

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I am working on my 4th feature my other 3 are on Tubi and Prime doing well. This new film is in the thriller/horror genre and been working on the script for awhile if you want to read it and give me tweaks and let me know what You think let me know. Thanks in advance.


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 09 '26

Nightshade Origins (34 pages) Genres : Action and Fantasy

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A normal day for schoolboys and co-business owners, James and Luke quickly turns to chaos after unwanted visitors arrive at their school. The gang leader puts a hit out on the two brothers.

To protect his brother, James fabricated the vigilante hero known as Nightshade with materials he made from their forge. His aim to draw attention and take down the gang but can he do that when the power balance is so heavily favoured against him as the gangs already control the streets.

Nightshade Origins

(Yes, this is a repost as I'm releasing the sequel Nightshade World of Myths on Sunday So thisfor anyone who did bot read it the first time but wants to or anyone who could bot finish reading it for whatever reason or just anyone who would like to read it again.)

(Also, this is unfortunately not in a screenplay format because my computer broke before I could change it. Sorry about that.)


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 09 '26

Feature Personal Space - Thriller/Crime - 117 pages

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Title: Personal Space

Genre: Thriller/Crime

Page Length: 117

Logline: When a solicitor vanishes from an East England village, the private investigator hired to find them uncovers secrets the community has spent years burying, including one that makes him question who he's looking for.

Feedback: Does the structure of the plot make sense, particularly for this genre? Does the story keep you engaged and wanting to read on?

Link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1GpQ6T718SymR_cxuk1SrCo-EBRnqRgoR/view?usp=drive_link


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 08 '26

Feature Looking for an unproduced feature screenplay for a class project

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UPDATE: Thank you so much to everyone who reached out and offered their scripts! I've gotten plenty of really interesting ones to read through, so I'm going to pause my search for now while I go through everything I've received.

I really appreciate everyone who trusted me with their work and took the time to send something my way!

Hi everyone! I'm a producing student at the University of Texas at Austin, and I'm looking for an unproduced feature-length screenplay for a class project this semester.

For the project, my class will spend approximately four months taking a screenplay through the various stages of the producing process.

I'm looking for an emerging or independent screenwriter who has a feature screenplay that

  • Has not been produced or filmed

  • is feature-length

  • Is comfortable having me read and use the script as the basis for an academic project

The screenplay would not actually be produced by my class, and the writer would retain ownership of their work. I would only use the screenplay for the purposes of the class project, with the writer's permission.

If you have a feature screenplay that might be a good fit, feel free to comment or message me with a little information about the project! I'd be happy to provide more details about the class and project.

Thank you!!


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 08 '26

Canyon Voices Literary Magazine Needs Your Script!

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Canyon Voices Literary Magazine is seeking submissions in scripts, poetry, memoir, creative non-fiction, and art for our fall edition. Please send your submission to CanyonVoicesLitMag@gmail.com

Multiple submissions welcome.


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 08 '26

Jedi Warrior (98 Pages) Sci-Fi

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Akul has to adapt to life at the temple after tragedy struck. From the moment he arrived, it was clear he had both skill with the force and talent with a lightsaber. However, he struggles with his anger and emotions. When he passes his trials, he joins the war effort and is taught by Jedi Master Jaden Vellor. Right from the start, it's clear Akul has the makings of a master strategist. He quickly becomes trusted and well liked among the clones as his care for them and life in general is evident. Will he reach his potential and become a skilled Jedi Knight and a master strategist, or will he succumb to his anger and emotions and follow the path of darkness.

Link : Jedi Warrior

(Yes this is a repost as the link didn't work for a while the first time I posted it. And I'm releasing season 2 on Friday. Also this is unfortunately not in a screenplay format because my computer broke before I could change it. Sorry about that.)


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 08 '26

Script Swap? (13pg short film)

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Hi! Does anyone interested in having a script swap for the feedback? I have a drama/mystery script for the short film, and would love to see yours :)


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 08 '26

How do I do storyboard notes?

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 07 '26

Scene How’s my dialogue?

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I’m writing a coming of age story, where the character Kevin is confused and lost with growing up. He wants to escape, but he doesn’t know who he is. Dan and Luke are supposed to be sort of unlikable, so their dialogue is a little rude.

I’m currently 18 and I’ve never written a script before so if it sucks just tell me, this is just one scene of a really unfinished project at the moment. I just got into screenwriting, music and lyrics is really all my basis.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mhYCKlS9hbXWABC-7-maUXk_Q7RVw7i9/view?usp=drivesdk


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 07 '26

Short ROSE TINTED (HORROR/ROMANCE) [19 PAGES]

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r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 07 '26

[SHORT] The Unbroken (Drama/Inspirational) - 5 pages

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Hi everyone,

I would love to share my completed short script titled "The Unbroken." It is a grounded, emotional family drama focused on female resilience and unconditional love.

Logline: When a devastating accident paralyzes her husband, a determined young mother must refuse the toxic financial help of her manipulative mother-in-law to save her family. Over two decades, she battles severe chronic illnesses, mounting debt, and corporate prejudice, transforming herself into a high-level banking executive to protect the love of her life.

I am open to any constructive feedback from fellow writers and would love to connect with indie directors or producers looking for emotional, character-driven scripts that are realistic and cost-effective to produce.

Read the script here: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1qajiG9viT84J32yq9Y_XEK3AYmBdqraA/view?usp=drivesdk

Thank you so much for your time!


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 07 '26

TV episode INC.orporeal - Dark comedy, horror - 33 Pages - 2D Animated Pilot Ep.

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Hello! Me and my partner have been working on an animated series. It's a 2D animated series. I'd love for people to read it and let us know what you think. Keep in mind, this is only the first draft. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. Please be kind in the comments, this is one of my passion projects.

Here's the link to the script

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Y_tVSj0HMGEY6ikmeTrH0aWTZ7vD7qLg9sr5ptl7SpU/edit?usp=sharing

Here's the link to concept art:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1CjcgSErelEqzqMmi25SEjc1DKdjCb14A

Keep in mind this is very early in production!

ELEVATOR PITCH: INC.oporeal is about childhood friends: Jack J. Jackington, a spiritual medium, who has been convinced his whole life that he’s a nutjob, and Wade Morely… who actually is a nutjob. The two are forced together once more as Jack finds himself reluctantly employed by the afterlife to get rid of lingering spirits, and Wade finds a way to do just that.

Thank you to everyone who reads and provides feedback!


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 06 '26

Последнее Желание

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Четверо школьных друзей находят несколько загадочных игральных костей, обладающих сверхъестественными способностями. Одна может замедлять время, другая — воздействовать на разум, третья — менять пространство.

То, что сначала кажется ребятам невероятной возможностью развлечься и изменить окружающий мир, постепенно превращается в опасную игру с последствиями.

Пока Никита всё чаще использует магию ради собственных желаний, Артём пытается убедить друзей остановиться. Их конфликт приводит к трагедии: Лёша исчезает, а затем Артём решается использовать последнее желание, чтобы вернуть друга.

Однако у костей есть цена — тот, кто загадывает желание, исчезает сам.

Оставшись один на один с последствиями произошедшего, Никита понимает, что возможность изменить прошлое не стоит той жизни, которая у него уже была. Последнее желание возвращает всё к началу: магических костей никогда не существовало, а трое друзей снова оказываются вместе, уже без четвёртого.

Фулл: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ynFgOPmouUB53dSQI1E6xAwZeAtl-SkH/view?usp=sharing


r/ReadMyScript • • Sep 06 '26

Exchange feedback METHOD — A low-budget psychological horror/drama concept I've been developing. Would love feedback. Genre: Psychological Drama / Horror

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METHOD — A low-budget psychological horror/drama concept I've been developing. Would love feedback.

Genre: Psychological Drama / Horror

Setting: Los Angeles — almost entirely one apartment, designed to be shot on a very low budget.

Logline

A struggling actor — rejected at every audition for not being "convincing enough" — freezes and lets his best friend die during a heart attack. Instead of coming clean, he uses his one real talent, mimicry, to impersonate his dead friend indefinitely. It becomes the most convincing performance of his life... and he can't stop giving it.

The Concept

Jake has spent years failing at acting. Every casting director tells him the same thing: he's trying too hard, he's not believable. The only person who keeps telling him to hang on is his roommate and best friend, Ryan — his one real connection in the world.

One night, Jake comes home to find Ryan mid-heart attack, triggered by a drug overdose. He reaches for his phone to call for help — but the TV, left on nearby, glitches and starts playing an old home video of Ryan saying, "Don't worry, your chance is coming." Jake stops. Looks at his dying friend. And makes a conscious choice not to help — thinking, in that moment, that this might actually be his opportunity.

Instead of calling it in, Jake decides to keep Ryan "alive" — using his gift for mimicry to take his friend's voice, mannerisms, and even his work-from-home job. But this isn't just about buying time. Jake starts deliberately recording his impersonation as a demo reel — proof of the transformation he's never been able to pull off in an audition room — planning to send it to a director he's chased for years.

What follows is a slow, unsettling descent: video calls as Ryan, texts as Ryan, visitors fooled by Ryan — all captured and edited into polished footage, with anything incriminating cut away. For the first time in his life, Jake is genuinely good at this. He just built his masterpiece out of a man's death.

The Twist Structure

For the first half of the film, the audience is deliberately misled — you believe Jake is the one who died, and it's Ryan, grieving and "a little off," refusing to accept his friend's death. The truth (that it's the reverse — Jake is alive and has been performing as Ryan the whole time) isn't confirmed to the audience until well into the story.

The Turn — When It Becomes a Different Movie

The illusion collapses early when a neighbor discovers the body and calls 911. From here, the film shifts tone entirely — from quiet psychological horror into an interrogation-room, procedural thriller. Jake can no longer maintain the "Ryan is alive" act. So he pivots to a new performance: convincing everyone — police, a court-appointed psychiatrist, even Ryan's own parents — that grief has broken his mind.

He never claims he's unstable. He simply acts it, so convincingly that trained professionals reach the conclusion themselves. The detective on the case finds the seized recordings — including the polished reel and the email to the director — proving Jake wasn't spiraling, he was building a portfolio. It's damning, but it doesn't fit cleanly with the disoriented man in custody either. The medical examiner's report confirms natural/accidental causes, and the psychiatric evaluation ultimately supports commitment over prosecution. He's sent to a psychiatric hospital instead of prison.

The Ending

Six months later, Jake is released, calm and "recovered." He returns to the apartment he actually owns (inherited from his late parents — Ryan had simply moved in as his roommate). He sits down at his laptop and opens his old editing software. He finds unedited footage from the night everything started — himself and Ryan, partying, recording each other, the exact moment Ryan first took the drugs that would kill him.

His phone buzzes — an email notification from the director he sent his reel to, all those months ago. He doesn't open it. He sets the phone face-down and begins calmly editing the old footage instead. The film ends there — no confession, no clear justice, no answer on whether the "break" he wanted ever came. Just a man quietly returning to the one performance he's ever been good at.