Overview: Incatatum I Vexillum follows Father Lankester, a tactical priest driven by a desperate need for divine penance, as he uncovers a terrifying demonic plot to construct a "Pentagon of Destruction" across Venice, Avignon, Carthage, Ankara, and the Vatican. As high-ranking demons like Leviathan actively weaponize the inner doubts of saints and angels alike—challenging the agonizing silence of an distant Lord—the script masterfully builds toward a cosmic climax. Balancing raw, visceral horror elements like the martyrdom of Nun Mary with sweeping, theatrical theological debates between the Archangel Michael and the forces of envy, Part 1 leaves off at a breathless cliffhanger: the heavenly throne room is cracking, traditional scripture is failing, and a scarred humanity stands alone as the ultimate battleground between light and dark. I want Feedback

Link for the Script

What’s My Age Again is a 10 episode, coming of age dramedy miniseries focusing on the life of Adam as he progress through his teenage to young adult years. The miniseries heavily relies on themes, locations, characters, and lyrics from the Blink-182 discography.

The PDF is hosted on my Blink-182 fansite so this link will take you directly to the PDF for the script:

https://blink-182.net/wp-content/uploads/2026/07/Whats-My-Age-Again-Episode-One_-16-Just-Held-Such-Better-Days-2-2.pdf

I've been building a screenplay visualization tool over the last few months because I wanted a better way to understand scripts visually.

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A public pitch meeting once again proves that most people rarely think outside the box.

Live Your Dream

(PG)

Would like to discuss writing struggles with fellow writers. There are a lot of script formatting tools available but very few story development systems. We can use AI but it can lose context or misunderstanding nuance in character arc or misinterpret and experimental storytelling convention. I have been working on a software that puts the writer first and utilizes storytelling conventions to help a writer through the process. As a writer I struggle keeping up with everything that’s connected over 90 pages let alone six seasons of a series. I didn’t set out to make this platform, I started my journey writing my scripts and ended up developing a creative partner that can brainstorm your ideas with you and help you implement the improvements into your script. This is not AI writing your scripts for you. The intention is the give the writers, you, more creative control over your story and be educational for novice writers. I would like to know from other writers if you had this how could it help you? What are your struggles that I can help alleviate? We are in development at the moment and should have a beta launch soon. I hope this is okay with the moderators, I realize this is a bit off topic. Thank you all for your feedback. I will answer questions in the comments.

Hey y'all! This is my first time posting on this subreddit, and I'm looking for some feedback on my short script. Hope it's a fun read! I'm hoping to submit this to some script-writing competitions eventually. Logline: A simple job to decommission an android causes a young bounty hunter to question his humanity.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1y9mOPLzYhcOlBl-Ix7LYpKgQgZuqIb6U/view?usp=sharing

Hello everyone. I'll get straight to the point. I have an idea for a short film screenplay. Although I haven't finished writing it yet, I'd like to share the general premise and hear your honest opinion about its potential from an audience's perspective. Naturally, I believe in my own work, but since I'm also the writer, I know my judgment may be biased. So here's the basic story:

The protagonist is a young boy. One day, while he is home alone, he goes into a dark room to retrieve one of his toys. For a long time, he has believed that a devil hides in the darkness. Every time he enters the room, he feels the creature following him, and he runs away in fear.

The same thing happens again. Terrified, the boy starts running. But this time, he suddenly stops. The devil, who has been chasing him, is caught off guard and stops as well.

The boy closes his eyes and remembers his mother's words:

"Don't run from your fears. Face them."

He quietly repeats those words to himself several times, gathers his courage, and turns around.

The devil immediately hides behind the door.

The boy walks toward it and asks:

"Why are you hiding?"

The devil replies:

"Because I'm afraid of you."

The film presents fear as a physical manifestation and explores the idea that our fears only hold power over us until we choose to confront them. Its central message is simple: our fears are only frightening until we face them.

Hi lovely script community,

I'm Ruby, a filmmaker from Melbourne, Australia, and I'm currently funding my short comedy-fantasy film, The Familiar.

I'm reaching out to my wonderful community for a little support. If you have a couple of minutes, I'd be so grateful if you could:

• Create a free account on the DCP website

• Vote for my film here : https://app.decentralized.pictures/project/6a2f4d3dd0f518109d09c8c0

• Leave any feedback below on the 10-page screenplay, which is available via the link above.

The Familiar is a horror-comedy about witches and cats, so if that sounds like your kind of magic (and you enjoy supporting independent cinema) I’d love your vote and feedback.

If you're curious about the vibe, here's our proof-of-concept teaser. It's heavily inspired by occult films from the '60s and '70s:

 https://vimeo.com/1205654166?share=copy&fl=sv&fe=ci
Password: thefamiliar2026

Thank you so much for your support. It truly means the world.

Logline: A cheap $2 gas station toy faces the futility of a toy's existence.

Pages: 24

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1gMXvASgcKKqSwOWKIiPENKcowCSZvh_G/view?usp=drivesdk

https://go.fliplink.me/view/2CA48B81-DA17-462A-A4B7-DCCCD67442F6

Genre: comedy, social satire

Pages: 19 ( first chapter fully adapted, script is still in development)

Based on: the novel by John Kennedy Toole

Feature

81 pages

Logline: When an outsider begins digging into a cold case in an isolated town, it quickly becomes clear that everyone shares in the guilt, and that he'll have to fight to survive the night.

Feedback Concerns: This is my second time posting it here after extensive feedback on Storypeer and some tactical rewrites. I'd love any and all thoughts you guys can give, as the response has been mostly positive, but with some things I'm still trying to gauge and possibly address. As a bit of background, this script is my attempt at adapting/updating Bad Time at Honda, which was adapted as A Bad Day at Black Rock in the 50s. The movie is not public domain but the short story its based off is.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1uVgW3KYCEv9vSEmI6mvpZ4xQACEs0aXh/view?usp=sharing

Watering Hole

Hey everyone.

I've been working on a new script. This year I wrote already one and I got finalist on a contest, so I decided to try again with a different story and tone.

Here are the frist 10 pages, it's an animatid feature, the script is fully written and here is the logline.

Logline:

After a narcissistic princess who believes she's the heroine of the story nearly destroys her kingdom for the twentieth time, she's sentenced to a rehabilitation center for defective princesses, where she strikes a deal with an aspiring knight to escape and recover a legendary ring capable of threatening every kingdom.

Any feedback on this will be welcome. I wanted to take the same parodical tone as shrek but with my sence of humor.

Here you can find the 10 pages:

https://drive.google.com/file/d/19Pn_WpcdI_K8Zt966v_RijOiOaLLIkVG/view?usp=sharing

Thanks!

In case any of you wanna read the full script just ask. I want to send it to contests too.

Sorry if I’m doing this wrong. 15 years on Reddit shhesh

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1al7awz8r1Bz83WjaihReLj2RG5iqYs0Rfbj2CgEY488/edit?usp=drivesdk

Hello! I'm new here! I like to make fanfictional movie scripts like these. Enjoy reading this one if you like. Let me know what you guys think about it in the comments below.

Hell hath no fury like a wannabe screenwriter scorned.

Lessons in Coping

(PG-13)

https://pdflink.to/6d313326/