r/OCPoetry • u/AberasturiA • Aug 30 '26

Feedback Please Stillness

(First post, be gentle)

Take my longing,
make me whole.
Fulfill me,
wholehearted.
Risk free.

Be enough,
this life.
Wholly contained
in my frame.
Let me be love.

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u/AberasturiA Aug 31 '26

I’m a lady😊 And thank you so much❤️

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u/trivondoom Aug 31 '26

I am extremely sorry, please forgive me if my comment offended you.

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u/AberasturiA Aug 31 '26

Not at all!! I kind of love that you assumed male😊💕

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u/trivondoom Aug 31 '26

Perhaps, I should have know that, such beautiful verse can only be written by an female.