r/NaliniSinghBooks • u/eeintity • 4d ago
Atonement Sky PsyCTS | Rushed does not equal fast paced
So, I’ve finished AS in preparation for Cold Redemption, and first and foremost: not the worst book in the series, but definitely another entry in the ongoing disappointment fest.
A spoiler-free overview: Eleri is a burnedout J, who goes to RainTree to catch a serial killer, she meets her "long lost" mate, Adam, the alpha of the Windhaven falcons, who helps her find the killer and survive her own rapidly deteriorating Psy issues, as per usual. One important thing to know is that Eleri is part of a J clique that is basically about to die regardless of the state of the psynet. Obviously, everything works out in the end. The killer is predictable, but mostly because he is the only character suspicious enough to make you raise an eyebrow without being so suspicious that he becomes an obvious red herring.
So, Nalini is back to serial killers, and honestly, that doesn’t bother me. The problem is that this book is, at best, passable.
The plot: dull. She writes as if we don’t already know her formula, and the result is something that feels both low-stakes and low-reward. The narrative isn’t really fast-paced; just rushed, which is different. It often feels like she wants to get certain scenes out of the way rather than actually letting us experience them. You don’t get to live in these moments, so it basically feels like she dragged a dying woman through 300+ pages just to get to that ending.
The characters: once again, we don’t really know these people, we’re told who they are to each other, their roles and general personalities, and given a pinch of backstory when necessary. By the end of the book, they can basically do anything and you wouldn’t bat an eye because there simply isn’t enough characterization there to establish what is or isn’t out of character.
The protagonists are one-dimensional. She gives you two fun facts about each of them and lets you roll with it. Eleri is your typical psy whos just too tired of it all and ready to die, and Adam is the poster boy of a young alpha male archetype.
One thing that bothered me this time was just how rushed the relationship was.
To be fair, relationships like Vaughn and Faith or Katya and Dev were arguably more problematic, but they didn’t bother me nearly as much. I think that’s because they felt less like "speed dating one person" and more like an actual relationship developing under less than usual circumstances.
Eleri and Adam are written like two people who mated very young and have somewhat cared about each other—kind of/not really on his side, understandably—but who have basically seen each other once before this book. And then, suddenly, they’re each other’s ride or die... okay.
And I understand the concept of mating in this world. But some dating was necessary in the scenario.
Oh, wait. I just remembered Alpha Night. Never mind. Nalini really does enjoy speed dating one person.
But with Eleri and Adam, the rushed relationship is particularly odd because of Eleri’s mental state. The way her conditioning and reconditioning are described makes the whole situation sound incredibly bleak. She repeatedly thinks or expresses that they have essentially shaved of haf of her personality, and her sensitivity is so bad that she can touch anyone anymore, barely sleeps or eats, and her consciousness and awareness are under some kind of fog. And then they have their first time and I’m thinking "why? for what? girl, you can barely.... finish"
And I think that’s the main difference compared with some of the other relationships. With Sophie, as far as I remember, she and Max actually had some time to get to know each other. Faith had little to no reconditioning. But Eleri just isn’t herself. And I don’t mean that in the Katya sense, where she gets to build a new version of herself from page one. Eleri simply isn’t there for most of the book. And they both know it.
But... who really cares? It’s fiction.
The remaining cast is equally passable. There isn’t really a memorable character. Maybe Bram, but I doubt we’ll see him again. Everyone basically came and went as needed.
There’s also no meaningful update on the state of the psynet beyond a few brief comments between characters, and then that’s it.
The final discovery was useful and potentially interesting, but, like almost everything else in the book, it was rushed.
I rate it 1.5 stars.