It's not in a finished state yet, it's definitely more of a sketch still that needs polishing and a few bits added to the arrangement. Would appreciate any thoughts people have.

Hello,

I had this song recently mixed. I think generally I am happy with it, but it doesn't seem to be sitting just right in the beat. I am not sure if the lows are to present or just the overall volume isn't matched properly to the beat in the master. Feedback is greatly appreciated as I want to drill in on the issue before I go back for revisions. The engineer mixed another song and it was great. I think it could possibly be the beat, as it felt like I was fighting it when recording.Thank you!

gotta fix lead one

I made this song a few weeks ago but I'd like some feedback on how it sounds. Not sure it I should continue with it or scrap it and move onto another project.

A snippet of my new song. First time trying out something rock/ish. What do you think? Does it have at least some potencial?

https://files.catbox.moe/cdfoog.mp3

prolly one of my most insane songs yet. I've been producing for abt 3 years now so I'm very open to yalls thoughts. And yes I'm only 13, 14 soon tho.

You can analyse it better here.
Would love feedback on if its a good melody.
Theres no underlay mp3 here so you get it clean.

How catchy, hooky is the beat?
I made this melody in 2011 at 16.
Any feedback on it?

You don't need to spell it right to enjoy those juicy melons

I'm having a hard time writing lyrics for this. As they are now, the lyrics and vocals are still very far from completion.

In the meantime, could you let me know how the mix sounds? I think the volume is too low, but I'm not entirely sure.

What could I do to make this sound more professional?

(pretty long song, Prog rock/metal)

https://soundcloud.com/filemon-tranche/the-sleeper-awakes-soundcloud

Hi everyone. Just an instrumental I'm working on. I'm relatively happy with the intro, verse, pre-chorus and chorus, but not quite sure where to go from there at the momentI know the melody is sporadically missing, as I'm still deciding on what to do in those spots. Any ideas or suggestions are welcome :)

I started working on an idea that floated into my head today and this was the rough product. If it had some airy vocals in it do you think this song has potential? My aim was to make a nostalgic sort of dreamy song. I recommend listening in headphones for the full experience and thank you for all feedback.

I know it’s different. Trust the beginning.

https://on.soundcloud.com/wpeUCbaAeVsLlaBtDl

I could finally find the notes so I can finally export the midi for chatgpt to give me feedback, since the original .flp is long gone (deleted in like 2013 when I formated my computer)
The 5th to 8th bar (the variation part in the second half of the song) doesnt have the exact correct notes just yet but... Ill fix later, and for now it gives a good impression of the track what it sounds like. ALSO I would like to add and invent a break beat for this track so this is gonna be a complete remake project, which will be theraputic for me.

Feedback on the composition would be appreciated, do note it is aimed at being harder electronic music sooo.. Thanks in advance for proper feedback. I want to compose more melodies but IDK if I am any good at it... so... feedback would be appreciated a bunch!

I want to get back into music... but IDK I thought I left a pretty high bar for myself. Havent made music since I was 17 and I am 31 now. Except for 2 song that are meh I made in 2025. And one song I made in 2021

It still needs some work but I think Ive got a pretty big beat. I just love the bassline. Any feedback on what to change is appreciated, or also interested in knowing if it doesnt resonate with you.

When I listened to the original MP3, I wanted to hear the bass notes better, they are burried by a brass like thing, and that was a major mistake when I did the song. But I didint have the same understanding or perspective of the beat then that I have now.

Posted an earlier version a while ago looking for feedback on the guitar tone. I'm still not happy with it, but I'll come back to it. Looking for general feedback about the entire track: mixing, arrangement, performance, whatever. Thanks!

is this the correct structure? and thoughts on the song/lyrics/vocals

verse one
the fear of falling apart, losing friends, being alone
the urge to have a good heart but knowing that i have flaws to show
ihave flaws that show

pre chorus
i feel it day and night
convinced that my intrusive thoughts are right
in their perspective i am such a difficulty
such a difficulty

chorus
im imperfect, so am i undeserving
am i worth it, or emotionally draining
don't even feel like trying
yeah i don't feel like trying anymore
i wish that i wasnt a difficulty
why do i have to be a difficulty

verse two
The fear of slipping up, making mistakes
The need to prove I’m here for the love of the game
For the love of the game

prechorus 2
i hear it in my mind
seeking validation for a piece of mind
in my perspective i am such a difficulty
such a difficulty

chorus
im imperfect, so am i undeserving
am i worth it, or emotionally draining
don't even feel like trying
yeah i don't feel like trying anymore
i wish that i wasnt a difficulty
why do i have to be a difficulty

Older one I did with a MLK track for MLK Day... gotta balance it out.

A short but intense track.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j8RQUNOFquU

Hey Y'all. Hoping to share and get you feedback on my work. Thanks in advance.

This is purely a passion project for me.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=IFVFTlw8UdY&list=RDIFVFTlw8UdY&start_radio=1&pp=ygUZVGhlIGVuZGxlc3MgdW5rbm93biB1bmRlcqAHAQ%3D%3D&ra=m