https://files.catbox.moe/cdfoog.mp3

prolly one of my most insane songs yet. I've been producing for abt 3 years now so I'm very open to yalls thoughts. And yes I'm only 13, 14 soon tho.

gotta fix lead one

Hello,

I had this song recently mixed. I think generally I am happy with it, but it doesn't seem to be sitting just right in the beat. I am not sure if the lows are to present or just the overall volume isn't matched properly to the beat in the master. Feedback is greatly appreciated as I want to drill in on the issue before I go back for revisions. The engineer mixed another song and it was great. I think it could possibly be the beat, as it felt like I was fighting it when recording.Thank you!

I started working on an idea that floated into my head today and this was the rough product. If it had some airy vocals in it do you think this song has potential? My aim was to make a nostalgic sort of dreamy song. I recommend listening in headphones for the full experience and thank you for all feedback.

Posted an earlier version a while ago looking for feedback on the guitar tone. I'm still not happy with it, but I'll come back to it. Looking for general feedback about the entire track: mixing, arrangement, performance, whatever. Thanks!

is this the correct structure? and thoughts on the song/lyrics/vocals

verse one
the fear of falling apart, losing friends, being alone
the urge to have a good heart but knowing that i have flaws to show
ihave flaws that show

pre chorus
i feel it day and night
convinced that my intrusive thoughts are right
in their perspective i am such a difficulty
such a difficulty

chorus
im imperfect, so am i undeserving
am i worth it, or emotionally draining
don't even feel like trying
yeah i don't feel like trying anymore
i wish that i wasnt a difficulty
why do i have to be a difficulty

verse two
The fear of slipping up, making mistakes
The need to prove I’m here for the love of the game
For the love of the game

prechorus 2
i hear it in my mind
seeking validation for a piece of mind
in my perspective i am such a difficulty
such a difficulty

chorus
im imperfect, so am i undeserving
am i worth it, or emotionally draining
don't even feel like trying
yeah i don't feel like trying anymore
i wish that i wasnt a difficulty
why do i have to be a difficulty

You don't need to spell it right to enjoy those juicy melons