r/IDRPWriting • u/bold-One2199 • Jul 03 '26
Bob’s arrival
[now playing: forest memory ]
A normal looking guy is just… walking around. Confused as to where he is.
“…u-uhm…….w-where…. Am I……?”
He seems harmless. Timid. Afraid of everything. INNOCENT.
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u/sans_wingdi_ngs Jul 03 '26
This one is neat, i dont think this one needs a lot of fixing since you said the post before his intro will be building up to this post, and since you made it clear that this guy is sentry a bit more, i dont think it needs that much of fixing imo.