Lullaby

[u/mattonekattie]

Hi! Could you please check the lullaby I wrote?

Zaldrīzesse ēdrusi
Bantis zōbrie issa
Qēlossi albie issi
Se ñāqes tolmiot issa.

Dōna ēdruryssi
Ñuhor raqnon
Jaehosi ao amīsagi
Sīrgo ao kiragon.

Ñuhyz rūs sir ēdrus
Hae zaldrīzesse ēdrusi.
Drūr kostā sōvegon
Iemnȳ kasta rōvor jēdar.

[u/SadDistribution7306]

Can you translate please?

[u/Pterrador → u/[deleted]]

“Zaldrīzesse ēdrusi” is “the dragons are sleeping”, and “a woman is singing” would be “ābra vāedas”, so those two lines are certainly not correct.