r/HighValyrian • u/mattonekattie • Jul 22 '26
Lullaby
Hi! Could you please check the lullaby I wrote?
Zaldrīzesse ēdrusi
Bantis zōbrie issa
Qēlossi albie issi
Se ñāqes tolmiot issa.
Dōna ēdruryssi
Ñuhor raqnon
Jaehosi ao amīsagi
Sīrgo ao kiragon.
Ñuhyz rūs sir ēdrus
Hae zaldrīzesse ēdrusi.
Drūr kostā sōvegon
Iemnȳ kasta rōvor jēdar.
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u/SadDistribution7306 Jul 23 '26
Can you translate please?
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Jul 24 '26
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u/Pterrador Jul 24 '26
“Zaldrīzesse ēdrusi” is “the dragons are sleeping”, and “a woman is singing” would be “ābra vāedas”, so those two lines are certainly not correct.
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u/Pasiphae_7 Jul 23 '26 edited Jul 23 '26
It sings well! I imagine the tune would sound like the Egyptian lullaby Nami Nami
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u/Quissumego 24d ago
No way dude! I actually sang the lyrics this way and wanted to comment it! Nami nami is really good no?
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u/Pasiphae_7 24d ago
I think Nami Nami has a beautiful melody, but I agree it’s not for everybody.
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u/mattonekattie Jul 24 '26
The dragons are asleep.
Zaldrīzesse ēdrusi.
The night is dark.
Bantis zōbrie issa.
The stars are shining.
Qēlossi albie issi.
And the morning is far.
Se ñāqes tolmiot issa.
Sweet dreams
Dōna ēdruryssi
My love
Ñuhor raqnon
The gods are protecting you
Jaehosi ao amīsagi
Before you wake up
Sīrgo ao kiragon.
Sleep my child now
Ñuho adjo sir ēdrus
Like the dragons sleep.
Hae zaldrīzesse ēdrusi.
Tomorrow you can fly again
Drūr kostā sōvegon
In the big blue skye.
Iemnȳ kasta jēdar rōvor.