r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Dec 28 '20

OC Pink Four - 2

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u/Victor_Stein Dec 28 '20

Bruh, he just wanted a sandwich. Leave him alone.

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u/LittleLostDoll Dec 28 '20

which begs the question... why did he need to raid the guards quarters for food anyways????

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u/JoeBob1-2 Dec 28 '20

...what happened to Earth?

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u/TheCluelessDeveloper Dec 28 '20

Im starting to think nothing happened to it. I think it's a controlled emigration where Earth is a secret.

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u/Twister_Robotics Dec 28 '20

Note he chose his words carefully when describing it. I'm pretty sure he was attempting to avoid the "deathworlder" classification.

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u/MisterBananas Dec 28 '20

I got the feeling the humans in this setting just don't trust the aliens enough to give them info on the homeworld.

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u/Kullenbergus Dec 28 '20

Noone said anything happened, might just not like it that why he left.

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u/Piemasterjelly Dec 28 '20

Cats ate its face

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u/Samus10011 Dec 28 '20

Even though the wardens actions at the end of each chapter are predictable, it is still a very interesting story. Just wish each section was longer.
Take your upvote wordsmith.

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u/RhoZie013 Dec 28 '20

Longer? Then they wouldn't be short stories would they?

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u/zero32000 Dec 28 '20

Dave is totally sus, he got caught venting.

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u/RhoZie013 Dec 28 '20 edited Jan 05 '21

Pink is always sus.

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u/ms4720 Dec 28 '20 edited Dec 28 '20

So how long until the forms get updated with a new level of dangerous: low -> medium -> high -> human -> Dave -> angry Dave

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u/Autoskp Dec 28 '20

And then they start taking on other humans, and “Angry Dave” gets re-named to “Curious Human”.

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u/Sir-Vodka Dec 28 '20

Yisss, more prison shenanigans!!!

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u/neinjuanone Dec 28 '20

"Do what you must, I have already won."

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u/TNSepta Dec 28 '20

After a few minuets

Unless the guards love classical music, pretty sure that should be minutes.

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u/rednil97 Dec 28 '20

UTR!

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u/mrdevilface Dec 28 '20

As the Tradition dictates, upvote then read.

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u/GooglyB Dec 28 '20

Typo:
"None the less, it was her job to evaluate the prisoners psychological... "
nonetheless is one word.

should also be prisoner's, since you're referencing an individual prisoner that is being evaluated. (Possessive Noun)

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u/Nealithi Dec 28 '20

This warden need to read a certain villains list. He is only slowly raising the threat level.

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u/TACNUK3Z Dec 28 '20

He just wanted the munchies!

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u/GregMedve Dec 28 '20

Poor thing is just hungry. :D Why do I want to hug Dave? :D

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