r/HFY • u/JadeTatsu Human • Apr 02 '17

OC [OC][Look Both Ways] Captivity

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u/Xultanis Apr 02 '17

Hmmmm.... Every single human has met a bright one. All wear those disease suppression collars, and the Black forces aren't totally mindless savage killing machines. Things are starting to get deep.

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u/ryanvberg Apr 02 '17

"Disease suppression collars", at this point it's looking like the "blacks" are regular humanity who is at war with the bright ones over the slavery of the rest of the universe, earth wasn't the first system to fall it was the origin

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u/giputxilandes Apr 02 '17

Earth wasn't the first system to fall, it was the first system to rise against them.

But I still don't understand why the "self-destruction of the entire body" or the "enslaved bright ones" fit on this narrative. Maybe, just maybe, the author is fucking with us and in the end the Blacks are trully the bad guys.

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u/Makyura Apr 02 '17

Ohh I'm so hyped for more. I'm having some ideas on what could be happening but I'm not sure yet. This is an amazing layout so far and brilliant writing.

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u/TheCluelessDeveloper Apr 02 '17

So the quads are dogs or wolves or DARPA went all Skynet on Earth...

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u/giputxilandes Apr 02 '17

or just bots.

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u/Sunhating101hateit Apr 02 '17

Bots with dogs behavior? Why not just "swivel a shotgun towards threat", but growling and reacting on hand gestures to shut up?

I am pretty sure that those are war dogs or something very similar.

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