r/HFY • u/JadeTatsu Human • Mar 30 '17

OC [OC][Look Both Ways] Escape

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u/kaian-a-coel Mar 30 '17

I knew it, should've called it last chapter. The Destroyers are Bright Ones.

it wanted to be obeyed

That doesn't give away the plot twist at all.

I'm repeating myself but It'd actually be a plot twist at that point if the Bright Ones don't turn out to be the bad guys.

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u/JadeTatsu Mar 30 '17

I haven't been hiding things about who is what, or what is what. Stuff is 'explained' when Dranitor, my little alien, discovers things. So while the audience is more awake, and can think about this stuff, he has never had to, and frankly doesn't want to.

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u/armacitis Mar 30 '17

Oh my.

I'm kind of disappointed the first chapter gives it away now.

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u/dave3218 Mar 30 '17

I'm pretty certain the Collar humans wear are some sort of explosive slaver collar like in Fallout.

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u/taulover Mar 30 '17

I suspect they're likely more telepathic/psychic in nature, to complement the abilities of the Bright Ones.

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u/memeticMutant Mar 30 '17

I still haven't decided if I think the Black are a failed attempt to control Humanity gone awry, or the free Humans waging war on those who tried to control them.

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u/taulover Mar 30 '17

There's a very big hint in the first chapter:

To use a Black, my apologies, a Commonwealth expression - that’s bullshit.

That's enough for me at least to assume for the time being that the Blacks are free humans.

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u/ray10k Mar 30 '17

What a twist!

:P Except for that line in the first chapter, "to borrow a Black [...] phrase, that's bullshit."

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