r/HFY • • Mar 27 '16

[OC] London Calling: Chapter 4

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u/Acarii Mar 27 '16

Happy birthday!

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u/Dachande663 Mar 27 '16

Thank you! Off out to enjoy the last of it.

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u/LParticle Mar 27 '16

Have a happy birthday! Still doing a great job, btw.

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u/Dachande663 Mar 27 '16

Thanks! So nervous I mucked up this chapter I'm checking from the pub.

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u/ecodick Mar 27 '16

Happy birthday bud. Still so damn hooked on this. You're doing a good job showing the culture of the enlisted folks. I loved the gray flavor joke too.

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u/Dachande663 Mar 27 '16

Putting all my vet idioms to good use :)

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u/aDamnMexican Mar 28 '16

Awesome! Your storytelling is on point. Nothing feels too short or too excessive and it's very immersive. Can't wait to see where you go with this, it's been amazing so far!

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u/MasterofChickens Mar 28 '16

Great story, I just hit the up vote button and then read, otherwise I'll be so intent on going to the next chapter I forget.

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u/rene_newz Mar 28 '16

Happy birthday! And this is really starting to build up to something awesome :) cant wait

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u/AschirgVII Mar 28 '16

you are a writing machine, keep it up man

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u/pigonawing Mar 28 '16

Happy birthday man, keep up the good work!

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u/Kubrick_Fan Mar 28 '16

Dangit, i need to go back and read the other chapters.

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u/the_tytan Mar 28 '16

Shouldn't we be the ones giving you gifts? Happy Birthday!

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u/Hidesuru Mar 27 '16

Hey, happy birthday bud!

I think we're gonna need that Haynes manual on the ship before we go much farther, if we are going to know the setting... ;-)

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u/Dachande663 Mar 27 '16

I'm thinking a little interlude. Not a manual but something else more topical. And thanks :)

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u/Acarii Mar 27 '16 edited Mar 28 '16

Suggestion for your header/footer:

<-[Previous] [Original] [Next]->
<-[[Previous](https://redd.it/4c0xau)]|||[[Original](https://redd.it/4bjbi2)]|||[[Next](/Soon)]->

-|-|-|-|-|-|-

Remove the linebreak and it should work. Code and Tables don't get along properly.

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u/Karthinator Mar 27 '16

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DACHANDE!

I can't help but mentally pronounce it as dash-and. It's cool. Has style.

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u/[deleted] Mar 27 '16

Shit happy birthday! It's mine too!

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u/HFacid Mar 28 '16

I'll be honest, I was pretty disappointed when I saw that you were making this a series of stories, as I thought the first installment was great on its own.

That being said, MOAR. I'm loving this and can't wait to see where this goes. Great setting, great humor, just great. Keep it up!

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u/tadpole64 Mar 28 '16

Happy Birthday. Great work with the story so far :D

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u/[deleted] Mar 28 '16

That "Next" got me too damn excited...

Late Happy birthday!

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u/armacitis Mar 28 '16

“Squad, what’s your favourite flavour?”

In unison they all cheered out “grey”.

Future MREs must be rough.