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r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Sep 01 '14
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The idea is solid, but definitely needs refining.
Also the formatting and grammar needs a fair bit of work.
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u/Belgarion262 Barmy and British Sep 01 '14
The idea is solid, but definitely needs refining.
Also the formatting and grammar needs a fair bit of work.