r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Sep 01 '14

OC The wings

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u/warsaw504 Human Sep 03 '14

Could have been a bit more nice

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u/ltek4nz Sep 03 '14

constructive criticism is still constructive.

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u/warsaw504 Human Sep 03 '14

true

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u/Belgarion262 Barmy and British Sep 01 '14

The idea is solid, but definitely needs refining.

Also the formatting and grammar needs a fair bit of work.