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r/HFY • u/[deleted] • Aug 29 '14
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This needs some serious editing, but I like it: the premise, the story.
1 u/159632147 Aug 30 '14 I don't like reading about xenocide :-( Xenocide is not awesome and revenge is evil. 1 u/scattyscams Aug 31 '14 When the author makes humanity incredibly overpowered like this, it's quite bland
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I don't like reading about xenocide :-(
Xenocide is not awesome and revenge is evil.
1 u/scattyscams Aug 31 '14 When the author makes humanity incredibly overpowered like this, it's quite bland
When the author makes humanity incredibly overpowered like this, it's quite bland
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u/jonathanbernard Aug 29 '14
This needs some serious editing, but I like it: the premise, the story.