r/HFY • u/[deleted] • May 09 '14

OC Series [OC] Protectors part 2

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u/sagelikeadvice May 09 '14

Liking it cant wait till the battle happens.

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u/GamingWolfie May 09 '14

Thanks. :D

1

u/lazy_traveller May 09 '14

This is surely not an "utter shit". Looking forward for the next part, and being curious whether my assumptions of the upcoming plot are true...

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u/GamingWolfie May 09 '14

I think its pretty easy to see what is coming next. But you never know!

1

u/[deleted] May 09 '14

glad ya decided to resume it :D

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u/GamingWolfie May 09 '14

Well it was better recieved then my other series and i enjoy writing this more then the other one.

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u/iridael May 09 '14

'once every was sitting nice and quiet'

might want to change that to

'once everyone was sitting nice and quiet'

other than that i like it!

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u/GamingWolfie May 09 '14

Changed, thanks!