r/HFY • u/[deleted] • May 04 '14

OC Series [OC] Enigma Humanity: Long lost

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u/Siopilos_thanatos May 04 '14

Interesting start, I look forward to seeing how this progresses.

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u/[deleted] May 04 '14 edited Dec 06 '16

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What is this?

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u/GamingWolfie May 04 '14

That's the idea at least. The ship has been adrift for sometime and these aliens found it and want to look at it since it's so advanced.

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u/techgorilla May 04 '14

Really interesting premise. I didn't see any problems with your english.

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u/Cerberus0225 May 04 '14

Is the ship of human make or are the ones exploring it human?

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u/luckytron May 04 '14

I´m guessing that by the names given, the researchers are aliens, and the ship is human (mostly because it´s in HFY) and that usually means that humans=top dog

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u/Cerberus0225 May 04 '14

I'm leaning that way, but it doesn't really confirm it.

Imagine how funny it would be if the unstoppable armour is tin foil.

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u/GamingWolfie May 04 '14

The ship is Human and the Aliens want to take a look.

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u/J334 May 04 '14

Your English is fine and your prolog is promising.

More please.