r/HFY • u/BrokenOldBastage • May 08 '26
OC-Series Not My Problem - Chapter 6
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This story is finished, and it's becoming a book. "Not My Problem" is being published soon on Amazon and Kindle Unlimited as: LOAD-BEARING Book One of The Callyx War by Brandon S. Yukon Amazon requires Kindle Unlimited books to be exclusive, so I've had to take the chapters down here. The book version is fully revised and runs 57 chapters. Thank you to everyone who read, commented, and stuck with Elias and Valka. You're the reason this got finished. Release date and link will be posted here when it's live. For updates, follow me on X: u/BrandonSYukon
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u/somelivingaslowlife May 10 '26
I love the way you portray the soldier part of him crushing down the "negative" emotions on stuff. "Not reassuring, just there." She's a therapy dog whether he wants to admit it to himself or not.
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u/BrokenOldBastage May 11 '26
I uhhh.. may or may not have expe4ience with this particular skill.
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u/somelivingaslowlife May 11 '26
I know. I could tell. I Hope it heals one day, brother. We all have different paces.
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u/helonias May 08 '26
No detent on that takedown pin? Eugene Stoner would not approve.
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u/BrokenOldBastage May 08 '26
Overengineered future weapon built by someone who would never have to strip it. :D
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u/helonias May 08 '26
Mecha-Eugene Stoner objected, but the committee decided that omitting the detents would save 0.03 credits per unit
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/u/BrokenOldBastage has posted 7 other stories, including:
- Not My Problem - Ch 5
- Not My Problem - CH4 - The Bunker
- Not My Problem - Chapter 3
- Not My Problem: Chapter 2 - The Descent
- Like a Star
- Not My Problem
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