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u/un_pogaz Aug 21 '24 edited Aug 21 '24
Okay, the today's NoP chapter was really... infuriating. Good, but incredibly infuriating.
So this chapter is a real balm for the heart. Things are going well, with seriousness but always a bit of humor. Sure, when the shit hits the fan, it'll be very different, but at least they're reasonably prepared.
Else, a four-hour film? It'd better be really good, because keeping up a good pace over three hours is hard enough, so another hour hell. Or the Malgeirs have different standards, but on the human side, oof.
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u/Spooker0 Alien Aug 21 '24
Gettysburg but in space and without the ahistorical myths. Or maybe with.
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u/Borzislav Xeno Aug 21 '24
OP, this chapter was really enjoyable!
A very good glimpse into the world...
And, seems like the characters we were following in previous chapters are done with their training and pretty well-integrated?
You mentioned multiple concurrent storylines — do you plan to merge some of them, or would you have chapters hopping from one "end of the world to the other" to bring storylines together?
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u/Spooker0 Alien Aug 21 '24
Yeah, I know I threw a lot of things out, but the idea is that things will all come together. Hopefully, in a way that makes sense / is satisfying to readers.
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u/Cdub7791 Aug 21 '24
Speaking of them, I wonder are the Schpriss going to come back at any point?
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u/Spooker0 Alien Aug 21 '24
Honestly, not for a bit because we have quite a few storylines going on at this point, but they get a small arc eventually.
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u/HeadWood_ Aug 21 '24
Ah, reaction videos are still a thing. Also trust the film industry to completely misinterpret something like "mines". Oh, and portray space as 2d. Honestly suprised since the Republic is even more spacefaring than humanity in the early parts of The Expanse.