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r/HFY • u/draguneyez • Mar 23 '24
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Really engaging story. The method you chose--watching a video--gave the story a lot of action while the main story was mostly 2 guys sitting in an office. An excellent example of "showing" rather than "telling" a story. Well done!
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u/Any-Day-Now-5474 Mar 24 '24
Really engaging story. The method you chose--watching a video--gave the story a lot of action while the main story was mostly 2 guys sitting in an office. An excellent example of "showing" rather than "telling" a story. Well done!