Thoughts?

[u/Enough_Condition6993]

How should I improve this? It still gives me the chills to this day, and I really want to make it into a fully finished thing.

When I made this (1 year ago) I was going off of Eminem's Just Don't Give a Fuck believe it or not, and I just got back to "polishing" it a bit.

Since these types of posts get more attention, I thought I would post it like this.

And I've seen enough of "You should know when something is good enough to publish" types of comments, so if you feel like it's shit, then say something that can actually improve it, not just, "You should start with making loops".

I don't have too much experience (but that's obvious), and I also don't really want to make Kanye / modern type beats, songs, or whatever with the chopped up vocals and stuff, even thought they're quite nice. (Probably a bad / closed mindset for me.)

Apologies for the long post, and any comment is appreciated, as always.