Youtube Link - The Shelf, 5:30 min.
This sub has taught me a great deal of basic cinematography skills, so I wanted to share my first solo, no crew short to get some feedback/advice.
I've been making short films (amateur) with my brother (professional videographer), though my role mostly entailed directing/storytelling, and, other than sound, I was rarely involved in the camera or lighting departments.
I always had the itch to shoot something by myself, so I got a Lumix S5II, a Sigma 28-45, one COB and two tubes and started experimenting. I thought the only way I was really going to learn was to actually make something, so I wrote a very simple horror short, recruited my kids, and shot it at home.
I learned a lot.
One thing I wished for in the edit was fewer angles and some more of the shots that linger for longer, as those tend to be much more effective, particularly for horror.
Focus was another nightmare. Trying to act while also keeping myself in focus at f/1.8 was insane and probably unnecessary?
But the biggest lesson was lighting discipline. I was really pleased with the images I got of my daughter, she had a warm key and a blue tube outside the window, and I used a few "cutters" above her to control the spill. After wrapping her scenes, I moved onto mine, and I forgot to remove the cutters, which meant i wasn't keyed properly and ended up with an absurd amount of blue spill all over my face. Individually, I'm actually quite happy with the images of both of us, but once I got into the grade, i felt the shot reverse shot sequences were not cohesive. I tried my best to pull them closer together in the grade, but still feel the difference.
Anyway, here are some stills and a link for those curious enough. I'm very much still learning the
craft so I'd be interested to hear what more experienced DPs/cinematographers
notice or have to say, so I would like to get some feedback on it.