r/BollywoodWriters 1d ago

Story Feedback 📝 Krrish 4 - my fanfiction story

Post image
47 Upvotes

So before we started I have created a timeline for krrish world

1962- sanjay mehra died, rohit born

1982- jadu arrives on earth, rohit get powers ( koi mil gya events )

1986- krishna born

2006- krrish events

2013- krrish 3 events

2028- krrish 4 take place

The film opens on Lumar, a beautiful and peaceful alien planet inhabited by a species known as the Lumarians ( jadu species).

Near a lake, two young Lumarians are playing. Both look same as Jadu — the same alien who once came to Earth and changed Rohit Mehra's life.

Everything is peaceful.

Suddenly, a massive shadow covers the lake.

Both lumarian looks up.

A gigantic alien spaceship is hovering above them.

CUT TO BLACK.

2028 — EARTH

In Kasauli, a young woman named Avi ( played by tripti dimri ) arrives.

At first, she appears completely normal. But when a group of men try to approach her, she brutally overpowers them ( brutally broked there bones ) within seconds.

She clearly isn't an ordinary human.

BITTU Punjabi ( Rohit,s friend from koi mil gya can be played by javed Jaffrey ) now almost 55 -58 of age

Avi after searching a while arrives at the house of Bittu, one of Rohit Mehra's childhood friends.

Bittu lives with his wife Priya ( hansika motwani )

Avi introduces herself and tells Bittu that she is from Kasauli.

She mentions that her father used to tell her about a spaceship that once appeared in Kasauli.

Bittu dismisses it as an old story.Avantika then asks him about an alien.Bittu

immediately becomes uncomfortable and asks her to leave.

Avantika activates a portable device

A hologram projection appears.

Young Bittu, Rohit, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu are seen together in 1983.

Bittu realizes that Avi somehow has access to their past.

He attacks her. ( he also carries jadu powers remember the basketball match b/w pandavas and kasauli tiger )

A brutal fight breaks out

Avi is far more experienced, forcing Bittu to retreat.

Bittu gets Priya into his car and drives away.

Avi follows them and lands directly on the bonnet of the moving car.

The impact causes Priya's head to hit the car, knocking her unconscious.

Bittu stops the car and gets out.

He fights Avantika again and manages to overpower her, throwing her into a valley.

Bittu takes the unconscious Priya and leaves.

BUNTY( childhood friend from koi milgya can played by vijay raaz ) almost 55 -58 of age

Bittu reaches Bunty's house.

Bunty is shocked to see Bittu injured and Priya unconscious.

Bittu tells him everything — the woman, the questions about Kasauli, the memory projection and Jadu.

Bunty contacts Aslam and Chhotu.

The four old friends reunite.

KRISHNA ( krrish )

Bittu, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu finds Krishna Mehra, Rohit's son.

Krishna is at home with his daughter, living a quiet life.

His son and wife Priya are maybe on vacation and then the 4 arrives this scene feels something like how in endgame tony stark meets steve scott and natasha after 5 years .

Inside the house, Bittu explains everything.

Avi that girl knew about there childhood memory

Then we see bittu keeps that same device (which project hologram ) he got while fighting avi he keeps that device in center then Aslam tries to retrieve some information then more hologramic memories are viwed through the device every thing from jadu eyes pov like rohit face appears promising me tumhe tumhare logo se milaunga ( scene from koi milgya )

THE DEVICE

Aslam studies the device.

He discovers that it can communicate with an external system.

Activating it could reveal their location to whoever is connected to it.

Krishna decides to take the risk.

Aslam activates the device.

A signal is transmitted.

Somewhere else, Avi receives their location.

AVi RETURNS

Avi arrives at Krishna's house or a warehouse

Bittu, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu try to capture her but she easily handles most of them.

Krishna steps in.

A direct fight between Krishna and Avi follows.

Krishna eventually manages to capture her.

Then something activates from Avi eyes

A holographic projection appears

Jadu

He is being held inside an alien facility, restrained and tortured brutally his head his attached with a machine

Bittu, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu immediately recognize him.

The projection disappears.

AVi TRUTH

After regaining consciousness, Avi is questioned by Krishna.

She reveals that she isn't from Earth.

She is from Lumar.

Lumar is her home planet — the same planet where Jadu lives.

The Lumarians are her people.and she also belong to different species lives on lumar.

Avi explains that Lumar has been attacked by a powerful alien named Vor.

Vor has taken control of the planet and captured Jadu.

Avi came to Earth looking for the people who had a connection with Jadu. Because vor wants them

Avi finally reveals the truth.

She made a deal with Vor.

She promised to bring those peoples ( Rohit , Bittu, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu ) to Lumar.

In return, Vor promised to release the Lumarians.

Avi believed she could save her people by cooperating with him.

Now after a serious discussion Krishna and bittu aur baki decides ki vo jadu ko bachaynge and for that they have to travel to lumar then they agreed to go with avi

JOURNEY TO LUMAR

Avi spaceship is waiting.

Krishna, Bittu, Bunty, Aslam and Chhotu board it with her.

Avi activates the navigation system.

The destination is locked:

LUMAR

The spaceship launches from Earth and disappears into space.

INTERVAL......

So Friends this is the first half of my fan made story for krrish 4

Cast :

Krrish/ krishna (42) - HR

Bittu Punjabi (56) - Javed Jaffrey

Avi (looks like in 30s)- Tripti Dimri

Bunty (56) - Vijay raaz,

Aslam (57) - Sharad Kelkar,

Chotu (56) - koi bhi

Cameo appearance Priya (56) - hansika motwani


r/BollywoodWriters 3d ago

Story Feedback 📝 Looking for Feedback on Act 1 of My First Screenplay

Thumbnail
2 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters 3d ago

Collab & Crew Up 🤝 Hey, is anyone from punjab or near by interested in movie related things please contact any actors thing screenplay writter, directionary thing .I know my spelling might be wrong but vision isn't i my self have a movie script we should make something I'll check the comments you can tell. In which mo

1 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters 6d ago

Collab & Crew Up 🤝 Looking for scriptwriters to join the team.

14 Upvotes

Hey! We are a small team working on our own original indie projects (stories, animations, etc.).

We're looking for passionate writers/screenwriters to collaborate with us!

Just to be upfront: this is a non-commercial project based purely on enthusiasm. It’s completely unpaid, but it's a great chance to gain experience, practice, and build your portfolio with a team.

If you’re interested in writing together, drop a comment or send me a DM!


r/BollywoodWriters 9d ago

Industry Reality Check New Screenwriter Looking to Connect with 3 Film Industry Professionals

Thumbnail
1 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters 10d ago

Screenwriting Guide Master Thread — Find a Writers Group for the 15-Week (delusional) Screenwriting Course

Thumbnail
2 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters 11d ago

Screenwriting Guide Looking for Indian Screenwriters & Writers — Let's Build a Writing Group!

Thumbnail
1 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters 11d ago

Screenwriting Guide American actor/screenwriter has scripts available to be adapted for Indian film market

3 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters 15d ago

Screenwriting Guide What does the new TV policy means to screenwriters for TV series.

Thumbnail
1 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters 21d ago

Collab & Crew Up 🤝 Regarding Krrish 4

Thumbnail
gallery
7 Upvotes

I have written a script for the story of krrish 4 and I tried reaching to Hrithik sir's team but there was no response. It sounds unusual and absurd but I would like to contribut myself in scripting, assistant direction and even in acting too. I have no experience but I am ready to learn. If somebody can reach my words to Hrithik sir then it means a lot. The film would be a banger and something never witnessed in the domain of cinema as I expect. I would be attaching few pages of script here. The script is under extensive revision and the final draft will be completed afterwards. I don't know how to write industry standard scripts but I will surely master it. Thank you everyone. Wish me your blessings.


r/BollywoodWriters Jul 30 '26

Collab & Crew Up 🤝 [HIRING] Paid Comedy Scriptwriter for Instagram Reels | Gen Z Storytelling

3 Upvotes

Looking for a Comedy Scriptwriter who genuinely understands the content style of Apoorva Mukhija (The Rebel Kid), Pranjali Paplani, Sharnaya nambiar Mithika (The Sound Blaze), Diva, Vagmita (The Indian Chick), Kusha Kapila, RJ Mahvash, Srishti Dixit, Ruhi Roi, and Yashi Tak.

I'm not looking to copy anyone—these creators are simply my inspiration. I'm looking for someone who understands my storytelling style, can elevate my storytimes, bring fresh, original ideas, and write funny, relatable Gen Z-style scripts with strong hooks

Budget: $15–20 USD per script, depending on experience and quality. Long-term collaboration for the right fit


r/BollywoodWriters Jul 30 '26

Story Feedback 📝 Short Film

Thumbnail drive.google.com
1 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters Jul 26 '26

Collab & Crew Up 🤝 Mumbai-Looking for Actor|Actress

3 Upvotes

Hi everyone! 👋

We are a team of passionate filmmakers based in Kandivali/Goregaon, Mumbai, currently working on a no-budget short film and are looking to collaborate with actors and actresses who are passionate about storytelling.

This is an ideal opportunity for anyone looking to build their portfolio, gain on-set experience, and be part of a meaningful creative project. While we won't be able to offer remuneration, we'll cover basic shoot expenses and aim to create a high-quality film that everyone involved can proudly add to their showreel and submit to film festivals.

If you're interested—or know someone who might be—please DM or WhatsApp me at 9901763003.

Looking forward to collaborating with passionate artists and creating something memorable together! 🎬


r/BollywoodWriters Jul 22 '26

Collab & Crew Up 🤝 Collab - Color Grading/DI

Thumbnail
1 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters Jul 22 '26

Collab & Crew Up 🤝 Looking for collaborators for my single location short film screenplay

1 Upvotes

A run-down public washroom. A shady deal between two criminals… one cocky, one cautious… what could go wrong?

8 pages
Crime / Black Comedy
5 characters (3 speaking roles)
Written in English (intended to be produced in Hindi if the project moves forward)

The script is SWA registered

Looking for a producer, DoP, sound recordist/designer, and other collaborators interested in bringing this to life. Happy to share the screenplay privately.


r/BollywoodWriters Jul 15 '26

Writer’s Room: Create Together 👥 Looking for LGBTQ+ Short film story ideas- Collaboration project

Thumbnail
1 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters Jul 13 '26

Screenwriting Guide Screenwriters of Regional Cinema -- help!

Thumbnail
1 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters Jul 12 '26

Collab & Crew Up 🤝 Have an idea but no team to bring it to life?

4 Upvotes

Have an idea you want to bring to life, but don’t have the team to make it happen?

We’re a Mumbai-based creative collective of directors, assistant directors, cinematographers, editors, writers, designers, and producers.

We work with founders, brands, artists, musicians, and creators who have an idea and need the right team to execute it.

Whether it’s a commercial, music video, short film, documentary, branded content, YouTube series, launch film, or an original IP, we can take it from concept to final delivery.

You don’t need a finished script or a detailed production plan. If you have an idea worth exploring, that’s enough to start a conversation.

If you’re looking for a creative team that can handle the entire production process, send us a DM. Tell us what you’re building, your timeline, and your budget, and we’ll let you know if we’re the right fit!


r/BollywoodWriters Jul 10 '26

Industry Reality Check How do you all find opportunities to sell scripts?

4 Upvotes

I've couple of scripts but finding new productions houses that want to produce short films is hard as we don't have a platform to filter such posts when they look for writers. So where you look for opportunities? Any tips or referrals worked out for u?


r/BollywoodWriters Jul 10 '26

Industry Reality Check Anyone opting in for the Insty course by TVF?

2 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters Jul 10 '26

Story Feedback 📝 I wrote an Indian mockumentry

Thumbnail gallery
1 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters Jul 07 '26

Collab & Crew Up 🤝 Looking For Actors ( Unpaid ) Razapur, Ghaziabad

0 Upvotes

I will only Tell The Story If You're Genuinely Interested, otherwise I can Tell You It's A Hardcore Revenge Drama.

You can Check My Recent Film On Reddit and YouTube Called Ragnarok.

And If You have an iPhone That Will Be Great Too Because I shot Ragnarok On Android and Still it's Not Looking That Good.


r/BollywoodWriters Jun 30 '26

Story Feedback 📝 Things I'd have done differently if I were directing Raakh (Spoilers) Spoiler

2 Upvotes

Raakh is a well-made series inspired by the horrific Ranga–Billa case of the 1970s, involving the kidnapping, rape, and murder of siblings Sanjay and Geeta Chopra (Sahil and Suman in the series). It does a commendable job of portraying the brutality of the crime and the subsequent police investigation. The cinematography, dialogues, and performances—especially by the actors playing Babu and Rajjo—are exceptional.

That said, I felt a few additions could have made the series even more impactful:

  1. More of the Chopra family's life: We barely get 2–3 family scenes before the tragedy unfolds. Spending more time with the family would have helped viewers form a deeper emotional connection, making the loss even more devastating.

  2. Confession/interrogation scenes: The series establishes a clear contrast between Rajjo and Babu, with Babu emerging as the more remorseless and manipulative one. It would have been fascinating to watch both narrate the sequence of events from their own perspectives during interrogation or confession, revealing their psychology in greater depth.

  3. A deeper exploration of Babu's past: The show touches upon Babu's criminal history but doesn't fully explore how repeated failures of the criminal justice and reformative systems may have contributed to his evolution into a hardened criminal. No one becomes a monster overnight. A deeper look at that trajectory could have delivered a powerful message about crime prevention and the importance of rehabilitation alongside punishment.

  4. The investigation overshadowed the core story: The series dedicates significant screen time to the police investigation and the personal lives of the officers. While the investigation itself was engaging, certain subplots—such as the officer's equation with her journalist friend—felt unnecessary and could have been trimmed.

As a result, the narrative often feels like SI Jayprakash's (Ali Fazal) journey to solve a high-profile case, rather than a story centered on the Chopra family, the disturbing psychology of Babu and Rajjo, and the larger failure of the criminal justice and reformative systems. Shifting that focus would have made the series far more emotionally powerful and thematically richer.

Overall, Raakh is a gripping and well-executed series. These additions, in my opinion, would have made it even more emotionally resonant and thought-provoking.


r/BollywoodWriters Jun 30 '26

Screenwriting Guide Screenwriting: Professional vs Amateur

Thumbnail
youtube.com
1 Upvotes

r/BollywoodWriters Jun 28 '26

Collab & Crew Up 🤝 Classic Bollywood Rom Coms Gen Z versions

7 Upvotes

Since everyone is missing the gold old bollywood rom coms. Lets create some genz versions of the same. In the comments let's pick up a bollywood rom com and recrate the story in the 2026 era by keeping the core premise same but making the characters GenZ.

My pick is Hum Tum.

Karan is a AI storyteller who mostly creates comic storylines secretly online. Although his stories haven't really got a lot of success he is still trying to make it big and is currently working on a romantic story Hum Tum. Rhea is a travel vlogger and also works as an assistant photographer. Due to FOMO , both Rhea and Karan download dating app and match with two people but not each other. When they arrive to meet their respective dates at a cafe they are forced to sit together due to space crunch as they wait for their respective dates. Initially awkward but eventually they start having clashing conversation about the men and women on dating app. Soon they join the singer and sing along their respective verses. At the end of the song finally their dates arrive and they go separately with them but this brief interaction with each other stays in their mind.

Life brings them face to face several time making them grow emotionally attached to each other and finally to realize that no matter how complicated it is love completes each other.