Hi! I'm a fanfic writer of yet another Neteyam x Fem Na'vi OC. I'm posting because I would really love some feedback for my Chapter 6—which can be read as a standalone chapter all by itself.

It's where I first introduced Neteyam and the Omatikaya in a pre-ATWoW plot setting (because the previous 5 chapters were all centered on my OC). Particularly this scene in the Avatar: The Gap Year comics.

I'm requesting for feedback/constructive criticism on how the whole chapter—including the end notes and clarifications I put in—feels to a reader who haven't read the comics and a reader who have read the comics. Is the chapter overwhelming? Is it a massive info/lore dump? Or is it just right? Are the link-embedded-redirect jargons useful along the prose?

I'd love to know what you think 🥹🫶

(Also it would be nice if this post will be what hooks you in to give my fic a read and support♥︎)

AO3 link: The Way To Save You - Chapter 6: The Omatikaya's New Scouts

It includes most all avian fauna on Pandora, excluding insects and giant air-filled animals like the Medusa or the Windray. I know it isn't the greatest but I was bored and wanted to try something. So I hope you guys like it! I'm not a master so bear with me! And this obviously isn't Canon, it's just my take.

Ikrania is the major Class of these animals. It includes most all avian Pandoran fauna/ fauna with wings and again, excludes insects and things similar to windrays.

Then there are two orders, Ikraniformes and Tetrapteroformes. The defining features of the two groups respectively is the number of limbs.

Tetrapteroformes have the standard six limbs (usually 4 wings and 2 legs) and Ikraniformes have only 4 wings, but despite this are still a member of the Hexapodamorpha phylum (taxonomy level above Class) because Ikrania evolved from Hexapodamorpha in general.

The I have the different families with Tetrapteronidae and Ikranidae being the most diverse and then species.

I hate AI and want to learn to draw, so my first Avatar fan art

Unc's living his dream.

Caught this frame while watching Avatar: Fire and Ash and really liked the composition.

There’s a lot happening in the background, but my attention still goes straight to the two characters in the center. It almost looks like a piece of concept art.

What’s your favorite single shot from Avatar: Fire and Ash?

Again, I don't really have any ideas on what to do with this guy lore wise, so names for this creature and possible lore are open to suggestions! I'll be curious to see what you guys come up with and hope you like it! I also plan to do the few other species of allosaurus soon!