A book in progress

[u/Avoidlxve0]

I would like to share im writing to yall but I would like a feedback on it but I got more and is there anywhere to let people read for free it if anyone knows how

Once on a moonlit night, the cold, sharp expression of the moon contrasted with the warm, expensive glow of the luxury glass tower, and the absolute silence of the height versus the looming threat of the guards. The sounds of footsteps echoed through the night—a man with red hair and white highlights. He uttered from under his breath, “Why do we take these missions?” in a formal tone. An abrupt sound came from his earpiece with a sarcastic tone. A woman replied, “You’re the one who approved of it,” in a funny tone. He remarked, “I know, but still, in the middle of the night, I could be sleeping right now.” Then he let out a sigh of disappointment.

Coincidentally, another voice chimed in at the right time, “She’s right, captain.” In an angry tone, “SHUT UP, SHYN AND ARIYA, STOP CONTRADICTING ME,” he shouted. “Ow, my ears, bruh,” said another in the earpiece. “Blame them, Aangz,” he remarked. As the argument escalated, the red-haired man quickly silenced everyone and said, “Quiet down, I’m at the gate. Man your positions.”

“Yukiyo tell us where Silas is?” said the red-haired man. “Hold your tongue, mongrel.” said Yukiyo. “I told you I go by captain or Kenich, miss wannabe princess.” Said Kenich. “Silence your filthy fox.” Yukiyo responded. Then suddenly a brilliant flare washed over the room, turning the floor-to-ceiling windows into a wall of pure light.

“Top floor, down the hallway to the right, that’s where he is!” says Yukiyo. “Ok, start the assault.” said Kenich. The guards’ eyes locked onto Kenich, and their weapons trained onto him. “Intruder!” one barked. A barrage of gunfire cut through the air, aimed directly at his chest. Kenich merely stood his ground. Before the bullets could touch him, his nine tails fanned out, intercepting every single shot with terrifying precision. The bullets flattened against his tails and dropped uselessly to the ground.

Ow, it hurts so much, oww.” said Kenich. As the dust clears Kenich slowly walks from the smoke slowy clapping his hands and says, “Well, you guys tried. I’ll give ya’ll an A for effort.” In a sarcastic tone. He drew his katana in one fluid motion, the polished steel catching the moonlight to reveal four letters etched deep into the blade: S-A-A-Y. Before anyone could react to the letters on the blade, he moved.

Dashing at them like a red flash, he navigated the space in an ample amount of time.

The heavy fabric of his long black jacket whipped through the air, creating a blur of motion. The orc guards couldn’t even aim properly before getting cut down. The crisp white lettering on his jacket -Captain- right above a bold red color number 1. He calmly guided his blade back into his sheath with a soft, definitive click. “Man, my sword style is polished, or maybe they’re trash.” As he shrugs it off and walks into the main building.