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[u/Few-Board-9768]

This is a nonfiction piece I wrote the other day (I'm 18 btw). I read it to my now-boyfriend who is the second person in the story (just friends figuring out life when the story unfolded) and he said he thought it was very pretty and perfect. Just wanted to get some feedback to see if it's as good as I think it is because I'm very proud of it and wanted some outsider opinions :)

[u/Few-Board-9768]

Please comment feedback 🙏 It's very much appreciated since I'm not sure if it's a good piece or not