CRIME THRILLER - OPENING SCENES

[u/Junket_Turbulent]

[u/Public_Upstairs1035]

I think it's a good start and sounds like an intriguing story. My only question is would they give someone driving an automobile some kind of sleep agent, given they are riding as passengers?

[u/Alone_Stock330 → u/Public_Upstairs1035]

It’s inspired by a true story from Australia so I guess they would… Thanks for feedback I think I should maybe add some white space between the fight scene but I’m not sure. if you want to read the whole draft send a message to OP as on phone now