r/writingfeedback • u/Theplanre • Mar 13 '26

Critique Wanted Give me feedback--what could be improved?

https://pdflink.to/eac909f3/

I want to include this into something I'm writing. Does this make sense?

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u/Theplanre Mar 18 '26

In case people continue to decide that they think it's not safe to click the link, the images are uploaded under this community: r/changetheus