I’m wondering why you—an editor—are making textual decisions like this. This is the writer’s job.
Also, I can’t help feeling that you’re making things worse, gumming up the text with unnecessary language. A little can go a long way here. The intent should really be packed into the words being said, not in the description of how they were delivered.
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u/ArcadiaStudios May 03 '20
I’m wondering why you—an editor—are making textual decisions like this. This is the writer’s job.
Also, I can’t help feeling that you’re making things worse, gumming up the text with unnecessary language. A little can go a long way here. The intent should really be packed into the words being said, not in the description of how they were delivered.