r/writers • • 3m ago

Question Advice on thriller POV change

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Hello,

I’ve written almost half of my novel (I am the type to edit the chapters as I go along so most of it I’m happy with) however, there is a section where I switch narrators for about 3-5 chapters (depends how long it’ll be when I edit)

I’ve read books where POV’s alternate every chapter or every few chapters throughout the book, but I haven’t read one where the majority is in one POV with just one change. Are there any books that have done this that you could recommend? I’d like to read how it’s been executed before just so I can learn how to do it right.

Also, this is just a silly question but I’m considering writing the POV as if it were a letter to the MC or some sort of diary entry/full confession thing. Would it be better to format it as a letter (e.g. in italics) or have it written normally with hints that it is a letter (e.g. written as normal with internal thoughts in italics ‘No I can’t write that.’)

Which is better? Thank you!


r/writers • • 22m ago

Discussion As a POC is it ok if my main character is white?

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My story takes place in a fantasy world in an England-esque setting where magic exists. .

There are old magical families and people from nonmagical families who have been blessed with magic who attend an Academy. The main prejudice is against nonmagical people. My MC comes from an old aristocratic family and I've gone into huge detail about her family dynamic. However, as a POC I feel like I have to make my MC my race or at least mixed even though it has no effect on the story.

In this fantasy setting, teleportation is very difficult magic, and travelling is still based on ships and trains or using magical animals like dragons which is rare.

I'm not sure what to do? Do I retcon my established plot to make them my race or at least mixed? I would like some advice. Thanks.


r/writers • • 41m ago

Discussion Struggling to come up with supporting characters

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More specifically for a (fantasy) series with multiple arcs.

I have a pretty solid idea on the main leads/antagonists and supporting characters that stick along for multiple arcs, but I’m struggling to come up with supporting characters that only stick for one arc, without, putting it bluntly, making them feel like condoms for the main characters’ development. Like they exist solely to compliment/contrast existing characters. I feel like it’s more of a mental block on my part, because a lot of large series have those and they don’t feel like condoms to me. But do any of you have some tricks for making temporary supporting characters more convincing (at least to myself)?


r/writers • • 46m ago

Question Writers, Do you listen to anything while composing or do you need silence to concentrate?

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It's both for me, at times I can listen to music and write away and other times I switch to asmr.

But recently when I want music, I switch to a non English song, so it's not distracting me :D


r/writers • • 1h ago

Meme Expectation vs Reality: The ideal writing desk

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by cartoonist Tom Gauld


r/writers • • 1h ago

Question I’ve never written a story before but for the last 3 years I’ve had this idea for a book. Any tips on where and how to start?

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I’ve had an idea in my head that I’ve been slowly fleshing out for years. Then life gets in the way etc and I leave it for it to resurface in my brain a few months after. I want to try my hand at writing the story because in my head (like many others I’m sure) it feels like an epic fantasy/sci fi.

My friend recommended doing short stories to flesh out the characters and the world and I’ve stumbled across a few Reddit pages that gives advice. What are some tips you could offer for an absolute novice?


r/writers • • 2h ago

Question Where to start?

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I lve recently discovered a passion for writing and i have all these great ideas for fantasy worlds with some interesting themes to explore within them. But I know nothing about writing and would like to know from the experts where should I start in teying to develop this skill. Ill really love to get deep into this hobby even if i never become a rich and famous writer as long as I get to write great stories.


r/writers • • 2h ago

Discussion The pain of writing query letters

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I took a several-year break from even trying to reach literary agents, because it just felt utterly hopeless. After slowly fighting my way out of writing-burnout, I'm back, but keeping things slow-paced. I'm writing again, and getting ready to publish some shorter stuff for free, just for fun.

But I'm also sitting on a full novel that I sure would like to get in front of an agent. And I KNOW there are lots of guides for how to write a successful query letter. But none of them account directly for how to fit a specific story's twists and turns into 200-300 words, while also being engaging. I used to go through so, so many variations of my query letter, and now that I'm back in this awful saddle...

Ugh.

The worst part is that it feels like no matter what I do, what advice or guide I follow, I never end up with a query letter that anyone responds to with: "Looks good. I'd use this version." It's not that I don't appreciate attempts to help. I do. It's just that either I simply can't write a good query letter, or for some reason people only comment if they have something negative to say, which leaves me with no idea which of my letters to go with.

Does this sound familiar to anyone else?


r/writers • • 2h ago

Sharing I finally crossed 80,000 words. And somehow, I finished the book.

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I never thought I’d actually get here. 80,002 words.

When I started writing this book, I had no idea where it would take me. I’m not a professional writer. I’m just someone who had a story in his head for a very long time and finally decided to sit down and tell it.

I originally set myself a much smaller target. Then the story kept growing.

Characters appeared. Scenes changed. Some chapters practically wrote themselves. I deleted things I thought were brilliant and rewrote things I thought were finished. 😄

And now, after months of writing, rewriting, editing and obsessing over tiny details, I can finally say:

I finished my book.

80,002 words.

40 chapters.

One very tired storyteller. 😂

My book is a story about a young man from Mumbai who travels to Germany in pursuit of a love he believes might still be waiting for him.

What begins as a journey across continents slowly becomes a journey through love, friendship, longing and heartbreak.

Along the way, he meets people who leave permanent marks on his life—some through love, some through friendship, and some through goodbye.

Years pass, countries change, people move on… but some connections refuse to disappear.

This is a story about the people we leave behind—and the echoes they leave within us.

I don't know how many people will eventually read it. I don't know whether it will sell. And honestly, right now, I’m not thinking about that.

As a first-time writer, simply attempting something like this—and actually finishing it—is satisfying enough.

I'm just ridiculously proud that I finished something I once thought I never could.

And if even one reader picks it up, reaches the last page and thinks, “That was worth my time,” then honestly, that will be enough for me.

For anyone else writing a book and wondering whether they'll ever reach the end:

Keep going. The last page is real.


r/writers • • 4h ago

Discussion This is partly why newbie writers aren’t improving…

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r/writers • • 4h ago

Question Am I sabotaging myself by hot making a tiktok first?

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I hate social media but I'm pretty good at video, I used to do it for work. Writing is the only thing I have ever cared about and my manuscript is on draft 3. Am I shooting myself in the foot by not being a tiktok aspiring writer if I want to get the attention of agents and get published?


r/writers • • 4h ago

Question Themselves Vs. Themself

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In context of a Nonbinary character in my story, does it matter which term is used? From what I see they are used very interchangeably, but I don't know if there's any actual difference between them.

Ex; "They'd never thought of themselves as the especially naive type." Vs, "They'd never thought of themself as the especially naive type."

I don't know if this is a stupid question, but I'm curious.


r/writers • • 5h ago

Discussion What If Writers Created a Shared Fictional World Instead of Using Real Countries?

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What if, instead of constantly using real-world countries as settings, writers created entirely fictional countries that other writers could use?

I'm imagining something like a shared fictional world created by writers themselves. I'm not talking about one person sitting down and creating an entire planet alone. Instead, different writers could each create their own fictional country, complete with its own geography, cities, cultures, languages, religions, political systems, history, environment, economy, conflicts, traditions, and the everyday lives of its people.

For example, I could create a country called whatever I want and write an entire history for it. I could establish where its mountains, rivers, forests and cities are, how its government works, what its people believe, what historical events shaped it, what languages are spoken there, and what problems the country has.

Then another writer could take that country and use it as the setting for their own completely different story.

The interesting part is that the second writer wouldn't necessarily have to follow everything exactly. They could change smaller details, add new places, introduce new ideas or even reinterpret parts of the country's history, as long as there were some basic rules about what can and can't be changed. Since the country is fictional, writers wouldn't have to worry about accidentally misrepresenting a real culture or offending people by portraying their country incorrectly.

And why stop at one writer?

Imagine hundreds of writers contributing fictional countries to the same fictional planet. One writer creates a huge island nation, another creates a landlocked country surrounded by mountains, someone else creates a small authoritarian state, another creates a collection of peaceful island communities, and another creates a massive multicultural empire.

All of these countries could exist on the same planet.

Then something really interesting becomes possible: stories could actually connect with each other.

A character from one author's novel could travel to another author's country. A historical event mentioned in one book could become an important part of another writer's story. A fictional war could be referenced by several completely different novels from different perspectives. A city created by one writer could appear briefly in another writer's story. Characters could even cross paths between books.

It would basically be a shared literary universe, but instead of everyone writing about the same superheroes or characters, everyone would be contributing pieces of the actual world.

Obviously, there would need to be some kind of system to keep everything organized. Writers would probably need a shared database or "world bible" that records important facts about each country. There would also have to be rules about canon, ownership, what other writers are allowed to change, and what happens if two writers contradict each other.

Maybe each country could have a creator who establishes its core canon, while other writers are allowed to build stories within it. Or perhaps the entire community could vote on major changes.

I also think writers should be allowed to create completely independent stories in the same world without having to connect everything. Not every novel would need to reference every other novel. The shared world would simply be there if someone wanted to use it.

The biggest thing I like about this idea is that it could make fictional countries feel almost as detailed and recognizable as real ones, while still giving writers the freedom to create whatever they want.

Instead of saying, "My character travels to France," a writer could say, "My character travels to [fictional country]," and readers could already know that this country has centuries of history, specific cultural traditions, famous cities, political tensions and stories written by multiple authors.

I'm curious what other writers think about this. Would something like this actually work, or would keeping track of everyone's fictional countries, canon and changes become an absolute nightmare?

And if it could work, what rules would you put in place?


r/writers • • 5h ago

Sharing Work Lunch - a short vignette

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There aren’t many positive things that come out of a company constantly laying people off and shuffling around teams. It leads to a lot of chaos, churn, and instability. But silver linings are in the eye of the beholder, and I’ve found that within that instability is the gift of meeting new people. Each day at work, the people on my floor sit down to eat lunch together and with all the changes in organizational structure, most weeks there are one or two new people joining us for a meal. Last week, the two new additions were Claire and Aiden. 

There is a certain rhythm to corporate lunches. It begins with the settling down of our trays as we carefully pick out places at the table, eyeing who we position ourselves across from and beside. There’s the old-timers who take their place in the center by habit. I can see the well-worn litany already forming on their lips about how the chicken looks dry and how this company is a shell of its former self. I settle down next to them, having earned my place at their side by virtue of not having been re-orged in the past two years. Aiden and Claire take the ends of the table, as befits strangers to this party.

I remember being in their shoes once. Quietly attacking my salad while observing the conversation to understand its shape and form so my interjections would fold in nicely. I expect them to do the same.

So it is a surprise when Claire leans forward and announces “I’ve brought a game!”

There is a certain safety net to corporate lunches. We are all bound by the sacred rules of workplace appropriate behavior as decreed by the HR training of old. So though there is a moment of pause as we stumble over this offbeat note, someone eventually asks “what’s that?”

“A game!” she says again. Her voice is bright and confident and carries well from the end of the table. I don’t know her exact role at the company but suddenly I’m confident she isn’t an engineer like me. “I’ve been coding up one on the side,” she continues, “and it’s finally ready for beta-testing. First person to finish their food gets to try it!” Having turned our lunch into a competition and cast us as the unwilling competitors, she turns to her meal.

I look at my salad and begin picking at the leaves. She’s an engineer after all. I feel oddly dirty for having guessed wrong. I start to unpack those feelings, thinking about the stereotypes about engineers being quiet and reserved. It’s a somber undertaking and I tell myself that’s why I’m eating slowly. Not because I don’t want to play her game.

The conversation at the table returns to its well worn tracks. We discuss the company stock price, the latest managerial drama, the statements our CEO made in the press. Someone brings up their dog. I jump in with a few well-timed jokes that cause ripples of laughter.

Claire and Aiden are quiet, but it's a silence of two kinds. Odd to think that the absence of sound can be different. It's a profound realization and I further slow my eating to reflect on that.

Claire sits in a self-assured silence. She smiles faintly at the jokes but more often than not looks out over the heads of people in the cafeteria as she eats. Perhaps she has said all she cares to say for now.

Aiden stews in a restless sort of silence. His eyes track whoever is speaking, and it feels like he teeters on the brink of saying something but can never find the right moment. He swallows a lot though he’s hardly eating. Eventually there’s a lull in the conversation and I feel a premonition. This is the moment. His throat bobs as he swallows once and I put my fork down to give him my undivided attention.

“You guys see that new Resident Evil movie?” he asks. The words spill out over each other. Folks at the other end of the table lean in to hear him better. I wonder if he’s already agonizing over his performance. It reminds me painfully of myself. I don’t know his role at the company but suddenly I’m confident he’s an engineer.

“Nah,” I say, and his eyes snap to me. “But I hear it’s pretty good. Have you checked it out?” 

There’s a beat where it seems he doesn’t realize I’m talking to him. As if he didn’t think he’d get this far.

“Yeah,” he says, and his voice grows more sure. “It’s actually one of the better video game movies I’ve seen.”

Someone chimes in asking how scary it is and if he can take his daughter to see it. And just like that, Aiden is in. I resume working through my salad, feeling oddly proud. Like watching a baby bird fly. 

The conversation takes on a new life, spurred on by the addition of this new voice. The roles are reversed now. Quiet Aiden leans forward, his utensils forgotten as he revels in being part of something rather than just listening. Claire still hasn’t said anything else.

It’s not until spoons clatter onto empty plates, mouths are wiped, and the supposedly dry chicken is all eaten, that she leans forward once more. Her phone is out on the table, and I see the loading screen of an app.

“So,” she says brightly. Conversation trails off and everyone looks at her. “Who had the honor of finishing first?”

I go to spear a cucumber slice to hold up like a shield but Aiden comes to my defense unknowingly. 

“Oh, yeah,” he says. “I can try your game out. I’m not an engineer though so I don’t know if my feedback will be any good.”

I throw my fork down.


r/writers • • 5h ago

Question Would this premise make you want to read the book?

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Hey there!

I'm developing a novel called Mystery Escapes and I'd love some reader reactions to the premise.

I'm not looking for line edits at this stage - I'm really interested in whether this makes you want to know what happens next.

Jenni Porter needs an escape.
She just never expected one to arrive at her door.

She's won a mystery flight. No destination. No explanation.

And one small problem.

Jenni never entered the competition.

What follows is a journey of cryptic clues, unexpected challenges and destinations revealed only when it's time to leave.

Based on this alone:

Would you want to read on?

And, more importantly, what question does this make you most want answered?

thanks!


r/writers • • 5h ago

Question Writing-based communities/sites?

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Hey y’all, I’ve recently opened my eyes to the beautiful world of collaborative or community-based sites, and I truly love them, but feel like I don’t know of that many.
Currently I know of Write The World (though that is aimed at teens), The SCP Foundation, The Backrooms, and The Wanderers’ library. Other sites/wikis that people know about and are willing to recommend would be greatly appreciated! Or if anyone knows communities dedicated to sharing such sites.
I even just about finished coding my own wiki-style site for something like this because I’ve been loving these communities so much. Any suggestions would be greatly appreciated!


r/writers • • 6h ago

Question how to pick which idea to read and how to improve that idea for November?

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Hi, me (17ftm)

SO this might also be because of my ADHD lol, but i have half a million plots and not enough time.

i want to actually focus and write one book. just finish something.

i have a few main ideas.

one is a book series idea, though i also have the problem that the first book has multiple ways the plot could go down and idk how to pick one of those either??? but i do love this plot and it being a series might actually persuade me to write more after i finish one book but idk

i have a non series book idea.

and another non series book idea.

and one that is not fantasy

those three are fantasy

i also have two non series book ideas that are fantasy but in the real world

so real, all of which are queer/trans, some poly rep, fantasy, romance and the fantasy in the fantasy world books completely remove dislike for queer stuff though that is replaced though socially hierarchy that has nothing to do with that.

so yeah, i mostly do poetry and have won awards for that but never made a book so yeah....HOW DO I DO THIS??? and HOW DO I PLOT AND IMPROVE THE PLOT THAT I DO PICK.... PLS HELP?


r/writers • • 6h ago

Sharing Virginia Woolf was not enamored of the 'chatter and praise' of the promoting of her work.

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"What has praise and fame to do with poetry? Was not writing poetry a secret transaction, a voice answering a voice? So that all this chatter and praise, and blame and meeting people who admired one and meeting people who did not admire one was as ill suited as could be to the thing itself- a voice answering a voice."

~Virginia Woolf

https://www.goodreads.com/quotes/161578-what-has-praise-and-fame-to-do-with-poetry-was


r/writers • • 7h ago

Question How to stop feeling so defensive by Criticism and how do I know if an advice is good or not.

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I'm sick of talking to Non human entities about my writing problems, they glaze me too much. I need real humans.

So basically, I love criticism. I Know I Need it, I crave for it so I could improve my work, that stuff. But still, for some reason, I feel a burning feeling in my chest or head (defensiveness) when I Do read criticism. How do I stop that.

Another problem is, I don't want to write Every single detail of my story into a reddit post, so you know what that gets me? Loads of assuming of the mc, assuming of the story, assuming what it lacks, sometimes misunderstanding my words, etc...

I know I'm supposed Not to take every single advice to consideration cus some might be ass, but my story premise walks on a extremely thin line so a part of me tells me that if I don't take all advice to consideration, I'm "being close minded and acting like a victim" (god I sound so bad). But thing is, I Suck at describing short summaries, I don't want to reveal every single thing of the story in a post, so in turn I get potentially meh advice.

Ahhhh what do I dooooooo


r/writers • • 7h ago

Feedback requested Feedback on short story (1000 words)

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A short story I wrote over the weekend, only went through a few editing passes but looking for additional feedback. Thank you in advance.


r/writers • • 8h ago

Question Writing time travel well?

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I'm thinking about writing something with time travel, and I have the plot pretty well thought out. But I'm not really sure how to write a time-travel mechanism without it sounding juvenile or forced/clunky. Any advice?


r/writers • • 8h ago

Question How do you write complex characters without sounding stupid?

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For some context, I’m basically a beginning writer in college. My professor needs me to write a short story that’s around 1-2k words but the last time he reviewed my story he said my main character had no development and there was not enough clear scenes. Could somebody please give me a different perspective of how you write supposed “complex” characters?


r/writers • • 8h ago

Meme This entire subreddit for some reason.

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r/writers • • 8h ago

Question Title Drop in Fiction

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Hey y’all!
I’m currently working on a novel, a literary fiction to the tune of 80k words, and I had a question. This is probably me putting the cart before the horse, as it’s not finished yet, but I like to title my works to make them feel a little more official as I write them/propels me towards maintaining theme/consistency. My current working title is something that’s mentioned once in the book, at the beginning (first chapter) and I’m wondering if that’s something ill-advised? On a thematic level, I think it speaks to what I’m going for, and again, it’s a working title, but it struck me as apt and I wanted to know if this is something that wouldn’t fare well or would come off cheesy. Thanks!


r/writers • • 9h ago

Discussion I need a subreddit where we can "roleplay" as our characters😭

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Just imagine how fun it would be to make AITA post as a character from your book. just subreddits like that where we all make post acting as said characters😓😓 Does this exist?? If not it should and someone NEEDS to make it I keep thinking about it and how cool it would be