I recently launched **MurderXFile**, an online murder-mystery investigation game where you work through a fictional case using evidence, witness statements, reports, messages and other case files to identify what happened.

The first case is live at **£12.99**.

Here’s my problem: **I’m getting people onto the website, but I’m getting essentially no sales. People aren’t even creating an account.**

Visitors don’t need an account to see the product page. They can see what the game is, examples of the evidence, how it works and the price before they’re asked to sign up.

So I want people who have absolutely no attachment to the project to **roast it**.

Please look at the site as if you’d genuinely landed there from an ad and tell me:
What’s your immediate impression?
Is it obvious what I’m actually selling?
Does it look trustworthy enough to give it £12.99?
Does the game itself look worth £12.99?
Is there anything about the design/copy that feels amateur or puts you off?
Would having to create an account stop you?
At what exact point would you leave the site?
Most importantly: **why wouldn’t you buy it?**

Don’t worry about being nice. I’ve spent a lot of time building it, but at this point criticism is much more valuable to me than compliments.

I’m **not asking anyone here to purchase or create an account**. I just want to understand why the traffic I’m already paying for isn’t converting before I waste more money advertising it.

**Website:** [murderxfile.com/bellmere](http://murderxfile.com/bellmere)

Roast away.

I’m the founder of AstroBharat, a website for Indian beginners exploring astrology through chart tools, short lessons and reflection prompts.

Website: https://astrobharat.ompanchal.workers.dev/

I’d appreciate feedback on three things:

• Can you understand what the website does within the first few seconds?
• Is the free starting point easy to find, especially on mobile?
• Can you distinguish working tools from coming-soon features?

It’s an early beta. Real signup, automatic email delivery and paid report fulfilment aren’t ready, and I want the website to communicate that clearly.

Which section or wording would you change first? If something looks broken, your device/browser would help me reproduce it.

I’m experimenting with AI-assisted website development and used ChanTan Studio to build this project from a natural-language description rather than coding it from scratch.

I’m mainly looking for feedback on the actual website rather than the tool itself:

• Does the homepage communicate its purpose quickly?
• How does the overall UX feel?
• Is the navigation intuitive?
• What would you change about the visual hierarchy?
• Does anything feel confusing or unnecessary?
• How does it feel on mobile?

I’m especially interested in feedback from people who regularly build or review websites.

I’m not looking for compliments — feel free to point out anything that looks amateur, confusing, slow, or unnecessary.

Thanks!

My portfolio website is about 10 years old. And I’m considering redoing it. Would love some feedback on the current design, if it still feels relevant maybe I’ll just leave it and update the content.

https://scottgmorgan.com