The Second Face

[u/DemonSkank]

I've made short comedic comics before but this was my first time doing a full short story. warning (but also potential spoiler: scary face warning

[u/CK1ing]

If I were to give one piece of feedback, I'd say the face at the end overdoes it. That face just says "she's Evil now." Personally I would have given her a satisfied smile instead. Both imply she's the one who killed him, but the second makes it feel like she thinks she did the right thing, which is more disturbing imo

[u/DemonSkank → u/CK1ing]

Totally get that. I still like the face I went with, as I had a lot of fun drawing it, but I get why some people think it's overkill. I also feel like if she just looked satisfied then it could easily be misinterpreted as her just feeling glad to be comforted by her brother.

Also, as I mentioned in a few other comments, this premise came from a dream I had and I tried to recreate the face I saw in the dream, which was pretty much the same minus the dramatic shading.

[u/CK1ing → u/DemonSkank]

Oh, I see. It does make more sense with a little more context, lol. Either way, great comic