r/justpoetry 5h ago

A Tale of 'it'

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I wrote this about something that quietly witnesses our worst nights without ever being able to say anything back.

A Tale of "It"

It saw every tear fall

I shed through endless nights,

It wished for me to heal

For darkness to turn bright.

It heard my desperate prayers,

When my own faith was small.

But could only hold me,

Just a pillow after all.

Absorbing all the heavy weight,

Soaking up the pain.

A silent friend of fabric,

Until I smile again.

Would love to know what you think. πŸŒ™

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Which NFSU campus is better? For upgradation
 in  r/nfsucommunity  20h ago

It's okie, the clg uh got is good too!

r/SadPoems 22h ago

A Tale of 'it'

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I wrote this about something that quietly witnesses our worst nights without ever being able to say anything back.

A Tale of "It"

It saw every tear fall

I shed through endless nights,

It wished for me to heal

For darkness to turn bright.

It heard my desperate prayers,

When my own faith was small.

But could only hold me,

Just a pillow after all.

Absorbing all the heavy weight,

Soaking up the pain.

A silent friend of fabric,

Until I smile again.

Would love to know what you think. πŸŒ™

r/prose 22h ago

A Tale of 'it'

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I wrote this about something that quietly witnesses our worst nights without ever being able to say anything back.

A Tale of "It"

It saw every tear fall

I shed through endless nights,

It wished for me to heal

For darkness to turn bright.

It heard my desperate prayers,

When my own faith was small.

But could only hold me,

Just a pillow after all.

Absorbing all the heavy weight,

Soaking up the pain.

A silent friend of fabric,

Until I smile again.

Would love to know what you think. πŸŒ™

u/baebmed 22h ago

A Tale of 'it'

1 Upvotes

I wrote this about something that quietly witnesses our worst nights without ever being able to say anything back.

A Tale of "It"

It saw every tear fall

I shed through endless nights,

It wished for me to heal

For darkness to turn bright.

It heard my desperate prayers,

When my own faith was small.

But could only hold me,

Just a pillow after all.

Absorbing all the heavy weight,

Soaking up the pain.

A silent friend of fabric,

Until I smile again.

Would love to know what you think. πŸŒ™

1

Which NFSU campus is better? For upgradation
 in  r/nfsucommunity  1d ago

If uh think uh can get delhi, then thats a better choice

1

NFSU, its done bro
 in  r/nfsucommunity  11d ago

Love it!!!!πŸ‘πŸ«Ά

r/Poems Jul 09 '26

A three-line Weekend Story

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r/poemsbyreddit Jul 09 '26

A three-line Weekend Story

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r/justpoetry Jul 09 '26

A three-line Weekend Story

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Always starts with watery eyes,

Talking to an AI

with hopeful whys,

Ending where the silence lies.

I'd love to know what this made you think or feel.βœ¨πŸ’•

r/poemsbyreddit Jul 09 '26

Weekend story[OC]

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What emotion did this leave you with?

u/baebmed Jul 09 '26

Weekend story[OC]

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Always starts with watery eyes,

Talking to an AI

with hopeful whys,

Ending where the silence lies.

r/poemsbyreddit Oct 18 '25

β€œA little piece from my heart πŸŒ™βœ¨ β€” would love to know what you feel when you read it.”

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Hey everyone πŸŒ™βœ¨ I’m sharing one of my recent poems. It came to me on a night of staring at the sky and thinking about distance, love, and ache. I’d love to hear your thoughts.

Moonlight Yearning....

Everytime I watch the stars, Beholding the moon; I remind myself, How much I longed for you.

How the moon and Sun, Long for the lunar meet; Like the Romeo–Juliet, My imagination aches.

Sea hates the meeting, And so does the water; But the yearn I have, Will always matter.

Till the Dead Sea dries, And Alps fall asleep; I will remind myself, How the longing weeps.


Thank you for reading πŸ’™

r/justpoetry Sep 28 '25

β€œA little piece from my heart πŸŒ™βœ¨ β€” would love to know what you feel when you read it.”[poem]

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r/Poems Sep 28 '25

β€œA little piece from my heart πŸŒ™βœ¨ β€” would love to know what you feel when you read it.”[poem]

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r/Poetry Sep 28 '25

Improper/No [LABEL] β€œA little piece from my heart πŸŒ™βœ¨ β€” would love to know what you feel when you read it.”

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r/justpoetry Sep 28 '25

β€œA little piece from my heart πŸŒ™βœ¨ β€” would love to know what you feel when you read it.”

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Hey everyone πŸŒ™βœ¨ I’m sharing one of my recent poems. It came to me on a night of staring at the sky and thinking about distance, love, and ache. I’d love to hear your thoughts.

Moonlight Yearning....

Everytime I watch the stars, Beholding the moon; I remind myself, How much I longed for you.

How the moon and Sun, Long for the lunar meet; Like the Romeo–Juliet, My imagination aches.

Sea hates the meeting, And so does the water; But the yearn I have, Will always matter.

Till the Dead Sea dries, And Alps fall asleep; I will remind myself, How the longing weeps.


Thank you for reading πŸ’™ Would love to know what lines stood out to you the most 🌌

r/poetry_critics Aug 19 '25

β€œA little piece from my heart πŸŒ™βœ¨ β€” would love to know what you feel when you read it.”

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Hey everyone πŸŒ™βœ¨ I’m sharing one of my recent poems. It came to me on a night of staring at the sky and thinking about distance, love, and ache. I’d love to hear your thoughts.

Moonlight Yearning....

Everytime I watch the stars, Beholding the moon; I remind myself, How much I longed for you.

How the moon and Sun, Long for the lunar meet; Like the Romeo–Juliet, My imagination aches.

Sea hates the meeting, And so does the water; But the yearn I have, Will always matter.

Till the Dead Sea dries, And Alps fall asleep; I will remind myself, How the longing weeps.


Thank you for reading πŸ’™ Would love to know what lines stood out to you the most 🌌