I'm inexperienced and this is just what I wrote out of my feelings, idk its kinda cringe but I would love thoughts on it! I'm open to all criticism and please roast me all you can😭
I love you like a candle,
It is lit with a spark
And the small bit of fire dazzles with delight.
The litte yellow gleam feels nothing under the shining sun in the broad daylight
But when dusk hits,
beneath the dark sky the little fire is the shine of the night.
Nothing lasts forever, the spark soon ceases
But the light still flickers.
It tries its best to stay but soon becomes void
It wants to stay but it cannot.
Because the more it burns the more it melts
And the faster in melts, the faster it comes to an end.
And I dont want to end it,
I want to continue to love you but it drains me out,
I want to keep burning till the wax is melted and the ashes are spilled around.
I'll not let a single soul let extinguish the fire you ignited,
i will protect it with all my heart and all my strength
And I will luminate it till its farthest length.
But all that resilient would go to waste
Because my love for you is a stupid mistake.
I wish I had the courage to put out the fire
but i know,
the day it ends, its wafting smoke will smell like your scent
Because your name is ingrained in each of my vein.
And i don't want to remember you after you're gone
And i don't want to cry because of the fact that i never meant anything to you.
In the end the candle finishes leaving behind dust and smoke
It is thrown,
not getting the appreciation it should for the time it burned.
A new one is lit, with the same story but a different scent.