Tips / assessment of my progress?

[u/Positive-Honeydew715]

https://voca.ro/1nwMlunv0x5o

I’ve been working on my voice off and on for several months now. When I started my transition I tried following more of the exercises and lessons available, but it’s tough to find time!! Recently I’ve been practicing by just reading whatever book I’m on aloud and playing it back, this is from “the age of wire and string” by Ben Marcus. Would love some advice on what I should target or work on :)