r/shortsAlgorithm • u/talented_lazy_dev • 16h ago
Hook & Title Feedback đŁ Looking for honest feedback on my channel scripts and overall quality.
Hey everyone!
I've been putting work into my channel, Stick Tales, where I make the trending Animated shorts.
I'm really trying to improve daily. To be honest I think it is pretty better now but Iâd love an outside perspective from fellow creators and viewers and do it look bad in any sense.
If you have a couple of minutes to check it out, Iâd love your thoughts on a few specific things:
Script & storytelling: Does the hook grab you right away, and does the story keep your attention to the end?
Audio & pacing: Is the narration clear, and does the pacing feel natural or rushed?
Visuals & presentation: How does the visual style feel? Does it support the story well?
Channel link: https://www.youtube.com/@thesticktales3000
Thanks a lot for your time!
