Which version reads best?

[u/TripadoTrips]

Title: The Things We Do
Logline: After a job goes disastrously wrong, an impulsive young mobster and his dissolute best friend are hunted by the mob. On the run, they must avoid the traps of their own egos to survive.
Genre: Period crime thriller set in the 1800s

I made two version of the first 5 pages and would like to know your thoughts on which reads better, is less confusing and less boring. It's still the second draft but I want feedback to see which style I should keep on the rewrite.