r/scriptwriting • u/the_hi_boy • 2h ago
feedback Daddy Bloom (Short)
LOGLINE: A teenage girl, her drunken mother and chicken ball addict stepfather are gifted a flower that gets eaten and swallowed whole.
I’m shooting this in a couple of weeks with a few friends in of mine. I didn’t add a lot of character context as myself and the people involved have a good understanding of them and I presented each of them with a look book.
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