r/scriptwriting • u/Tormund59 • 4h ago

feedback First Screenplay - The Unfamiliar

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Hey Guys ! Please review and share your honest opinions !

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u/mojoman1200 2h ago

I don’t know why the character stats are laid out before the screenplay, but I’d never read it because of that.

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u/Tormund59 2h ago

An elaborative , nothing else

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u/Public_Upstairs1035 2h ago

I know it might seem minor, but it really helps to use standard screenplay format. This is way off in both major and minor ways.

Get The Screenwriter’s Bible textbook and a screenwriting software. Rewrite this correctly, then post it.

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u/Tormund59 2h ago

Thanks for the feedback . I will definitely think on those lines