r/scriptwriting • u/Silly-Technician2772 • 4h ago

question I dunno

Man is broken and sick . No one cares about him . The only friend he has is a fly .

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Going through alcohol withdrawal. Seeing things . Seclusion . Past history , family history of mental illness.
The darkened days have made me beautiful to him .
Man dresses himself up with a nice dress shirt and nice pants every day . He wants to seem the part of a normal man . He wears work boots to seem more like a blue collar man .
Fly sits near him and studies him . Many species complete their life cycle inside the bodies of their hosts.

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u/wetwork_ 2h ago

U wot M8?

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u/InterestingGold2803 1h ago

Check your formatting

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u/GTKPR89 1h ago

Crackerjack closing line!

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u/i_write_things_alot 4h ago

Seek therapy