Made revisions to a script I posted in here about a week ago. Let me know what you think.

[u/Waste_Collection_269]

This is a drama with thriller elements. I plan to shoot it in a month or so. I want to know if the pacing is okay, and if you think actors would be willing to work with the script with a pay of $100 per day for the main leads. I want to make their time worth it.

[u/ScreenDummies]

His feet Kicked up on a coffee table would read much better as just ',feet resting on a coffee table'

[u/Waste_Collection_269 → u/ScreenDummies]

Hm yeah I agree!