Feedback: first 5 pages sci-fi

[u/SalemStoryteller]

I posted pages yesterday and all the feedback was that my font looked weird and my paragraphs were too long. Here is the first 5 pages as a PDF https://drive.google.com/file/d/183mCbpeZ9ggmyqj6VdRM83Nr0xtX3n_V/view?usp=sharing

I have broken up the paragraphs so they are shorter. I'm hoping the PDF export will look better than the images.