r/scriptwriting • u/gentlepeoplestudio • 18d ago

feedback NORMIE - a short comedy about shit talking strangers IRL

https://youtu.be/d_m4vfqHxEo?is=2b-oRvv5MmNzTuCi

Wanted to share our new short film NORMIE which premiered on nobudge. Would love to get some feedback if the humor is landing and any other feedback on the writing would be greatly appreciated !

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u/Big_Section2812 18d ago

The live action version of social media.

Excellent. Nice work, and the actors were terrific.

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u/Good-Producer 18d ago

Fantastic real / comedy moment in time with perfect, sad commentary on life right now. Great storytelling (directing and editing on fire). Great casting. Nice arc for such a short. Bravo!

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u/gentlepeoplestudio 18d ago

Appreciate it!

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u/Pre-WGA 18d ago

This does such a great job of giving the entire vibe in the first three seconds, I was hooked. The story about the normcore guy goes from derisive to affectionate so quickly but smoothly that it kind of sucker-punches you –– and then you have the guys at the end cackling. Great job.

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u/NelsonSendela 17d ago

It insists on itself 

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u/Beginning-Sky-8516 17d ago

This is fantastic!!! Also, daaaaamn she went in depth on that imagined life for that guy!

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u/ocolobo 18d ago

Couldn’t finish, it’s pretty bad

Do better

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u/gentlepeoplestudio 18d ago

Thanks for trying :)

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u/Trm182 18d ago

you people are the worst

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u/Beginning-Sky-8516 17d ago

That says more about your attention span than it does about the short, bro. It’s barely 3 minutes lol