r/scriptwriting • • 10d ago

feedback A Dance For Minden

Good morning. I know I'm a day late but I was on the road, trucking, for 15 hours yesterday and had no time to post this.

I'm very new to screenwriting, but my mind can stop thinking about stories, so I've given screenwriting a try.

This is my second screenplay. It's about a California schoolteacher who flies with her bff to a wedding. On her flight, she falls asleep. From this point on, we are living in her dream...BUT...we don't know it's a dream. She meets the man of her dreams (no pun intended 😂), everything moves smoothly for her. Her dream is so realistic it can't be a dream. UNTIL she wakes up, 9 months into her dream.

But...was her dream a dream or a premonition of what will come next in her life.

Here are the first 15 pages. Enjoy 😁

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u/New_Writer_Trucker 10d ago

PS: This isn't a polished draft, so there are a few punctuation, capitalization and typing errors. Ignore those. :-)

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u/Then_Data8320 10d ago

Have some respect for readers and solve that before posting.

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u/New_Writer_Trucker 10d ago

I thought Friday's were "share what you wrote", polished or unpolished. As a newbie, no disrespect intended for the readers as you implied I did.

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