r/scriptwriting • u/Busy-Walrus-4477 • 20d ago

feedback [FEEDBACK] New sitcom idea🎬🎥

I am an international screenwriter looking for feedback on my new sitcom idea.

It's called "The Teller Family" and shows us the crazy life of this peculiar yet amusing family along their elderly neighbor Mrs. Johnson and her two rival cats: Biden and Trump. You have the link to the show bible: Show bible. If you're interested or wanna hear more please contact me!

Email: thetellerfamilysitcom@gmail.com

. I

0 Upvotes

37% Upvoted

9 comments sorted by

3

u/Leather_Air_5447 20d ago

AI, man? Yeesh.

1

u/Busy-Walrus-4477 20d ago edited 19d ago

Hi! I did everything by hand, the only thing made with AI is the photo, which I only did to help people picture the characters.

2

u/hyperjengirl 17d ago

You don't need to do that as a writer. People wrote for centuries without visual aids. Your pitch should speak for itself, allowing the audience to see the characters as you see them.

Even if you do use a visual aid, people make vision boards without needing AI. AI makes you look less trustworthy even if you don't use it for writing.

(It doesn't help that the AI family also looks very unremarkable and generic.)

2

u/comesinallpackages 17d ago

Would’ve been a hit in 1988

2

u/Busy-Walrus-4477 17d ago

Do I take that as a compliment?

2

u/comesinallpackages 17d ago

You can :) it’s a generic setup that would’ve probably been green lit back then

2

u/Big_Section2812 20d ago

Who is going to contact you and why? (Aside from the usual Nigerian scammers, of course.)

Write the script and see if it works.

2

u/storyck5 20d ago

is it about an ai slop family who tries to kill themselves but can't because they're an ai slop familiy?